Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. I love the poem. Winter's winds are special. They can blow the snow around. Sometimes it is pretty. Some times they are blowing up barriers for us. Great work. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck with the contest
you have the correct components for this one
your few words allow the reader to see the winter's dance as cold air streams swirl like white tutus
flows well
cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

Comment from RodG

Excellent

of all the entries this one captures the essence of a haiku the best. Easy to visualize the snowflakes in the cold winter air.
Wonderful metaphor of describing them as "white tutus swirling."
The S & W alliteration establish a soft mood throughout the poem.
Very nicely done.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Swirling snow can provide us with a lovely visual dynamic.
"Swirl on cold air streams" is nice. Hopefully winter will soon be over as beautiful as it is.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

Comment from rouskin

Excellent

wind chimes clink and clatter wildly ~storm brewing The picture so totally completes the imagery for the reader. Best of luck and be blessed

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Great overall job on this one - loved your imagery.
Thanks for sharing it and good luck.
Maureen

White tutus
Swirl on cold airstreams
Winter's dance

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014