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Deep Sea Dive-(3-5-3)

exploring an underwater world

5 total reviews 
Comment from nelliesellie
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I love the picture. I love the poem. Being able to control air has allowed humans to go places. We go under water. We go under seas. Great work. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

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Comment from BeasPeas
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Very nicely done. A complete thought on each line. Nice presentation, colorful. First line prepares us for the adventure, second line we're exploring, and--last line tells us of the outcome.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

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Comment from rouskin
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air tanks full dive, explore new world breathtaking Good story here my friend, with a beautiful picture to match
Best of luck and be blessed

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

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Comment from Maureen's Pen
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Great word choices in this work - descriptive and perfect last line.
Thanks for sharing it and good luck.
Maureen

air tanks full
dive, explore new world
breathtaking

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

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Comment from wiljacro
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HI! Your artwork together with the 3-5-3 make the undersea world come to instant life. I could almost feel myself swimming alongside. wiljacro.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

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