Lone willow
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Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, you are so good at these! This creates such a mood, it's amazing, with so few words! Wonderful imagery evoked as well. Best of luck with this gem!
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Wow, you are so good at these! This creates such a mood, it's amazing, with so few words! Wonderful imagery evoked as well. Best of luck with this gem!
Comment Written 02-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2014
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Thanks for the great review.
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My pleasure.
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. Willows look pretty while their long branches sway in the breeze. Willows are usually alone. They are water hogs. Other trees do not do good around them. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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I love the picture. I love the poem. Willows look pretty while their long branches sway in the breeze. Willows are usually alone. They are water hogs. Other trees do not do good around them. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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Thanks for the great review.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is super nice. All lines are excellent, but especially "sways to sultry breeze." Reader picks up the mood of your piece. Presentation is great.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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This is super nice. All lines are excellent, but especially "sways to sultry breeze." Reader picks up the mood of your piece. Presentation is great.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rouskin
This was just wonderful both in form and content. The picture so totally completes the imagery for the reader.
Best of luck and be blessed
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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This was just wonderful both in form and content. The picture so totally completes the imagery for the reader.
Best of luck and be blessed
Comment Written 28-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
I loved your last line - actually they are all great lines.
Great work and good luck.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
lone willow
sways to sultry breeze
summer tease
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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I loved your last line - actually they are all great lines.
Great work and good luck.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
lone willow
sways to sultry breeze
summer tease
Comment Written 28-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Eagle-75
I'll never look at a willow tree in quite the same way again !! I know it's the breeze you're talking about, but the combination of 'sultry' and 'tease' makes me picture the willow as a long-haired siren just waiting to captivate some unsuspecting passer-by!! Hope this doesn't go too far beyond your imaginings !! Lovely - roll-on those lovely sultry summer days !!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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I'll never look at a willow tree in quite the same way again !! I know it's the breeze you're talking about, but the combination of 'sultry' and 'tease' makes me picture the willow as a long-haired siren just waiting to captivate some unsuspecting passer-by!! Hope this doesn't go too far beyond your imaginings !! Lovely - roll-on those lovely sultry summer days !!
Comment Written 28-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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Ha ha. that was my intent. Thanks for reviewing.
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Ha ha. that was my intent. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from omerta16
quite the refreshing three liner! it had a musical feel to it with the motion and sense of movement it invoked. this style of poem is not easy and i think you did a fine job. thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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quite the refreshing three liner! it had a musical feel to it with the motion and sense of movement it invoked. this style of poem is not easy and i think you did a fine job. thanks for sharing
Comment Written 28-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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Thanks for reviewing.