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Comment from A Jesterstear
Yes, in the not so distant past in Europe, challenges were made with the slapping of a glove across the face. Scores were then settled with dueling pistols, ten paces, turn and fire. Of course today that would not work, you would be dead before you took your second step. That's evolution for you. Another great poem. AJ.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Yes, in the not so distant past in Europe, challenges were made with the slapping of a glove across the face. Scores were then settled with dueling pistols, ten paces, turn and fire. Of course today that would not work, you would be dead before you took your second step. That's evolution for you. Another great poem. AJ.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Thanks so much, AJ, for the great review, and also for your insights, which I always love. You're an old soul, my friend.
Comment from jluzzle
Alright, you sir, have written a great little piece here. It flows easy and has a pretty cool little picture in the background. I picture two old men, sitting at a table arguing over who had the worst time in the military. Very easy to read, with a smile the entire time.
nice write...
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Alright, you sir, have written a great little piece here. It flows easy and has a pretty cool little picture in the background. I picture two old men, sitting at a table arguing over who had the worst time in the military. Very easy to read, with a smile the entire time.
nice write...
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Thanks so much, jluzzle! I appreciate it!
Comment from comanalbert
Ah, the gods! One brand of Colt was actually called the Peacemaker...I am not pro-gun also, but without guns there wouldn't be U.S. today and so no FS.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Ah, the gods! One brand of Colt was actually called the Peacemaker...I am not pro-gun also, but without guns there wouldn't be U.S. today and so no FS.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2014
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Yes, one of the all-time best gun names ever, my friend. Thank you!
Comment from Katzintx
LOL. You do have a way with words don't you. Once more I can not find fault with your structure or form ,it is as you have placed in our author notes.
Where do you get your idea's for your rogue. I am beginning to form wild plots of time travel or possible third life reincarnations...Nice work
katz
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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LOL. You do have a way with words don't you. Once more I can not find fault with your structure or form ,it is as you have placed in our author notes.
Where do you get your idea's for your rogue. I am beginning to form wild plots of time travel or possible third life reincarnations...Nice work
katz
Comment Written 28-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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Katz, they pop up all over the place. The key is to catch them when they do. I use the Notes app in my iPhone so I won't forget them. Go with those plots, Katz. Mine the gems, my friend.
Comment from DonandVicki
I'm for owning guns but only for those that are trained to use them and kept under lock and key. Your poem has good Meter and I enjoyed the poetic verse. Don
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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I'm for owning guns but only for those that are trained to use them and kept under lock and key. Your poem has good Meter and I enjoyed the poetic verse. Don
Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, Don! I appreciate it!
Comment from Lisloh
You took this issue off the chain,,,,
Excellent display of composition.
Sure hope FS excepts this review,,, smh at them
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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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You took this issue off the chain,,,,
Excellent display of composition.
Sure hope FS excepts this review,,, smh at them
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Why the four, my friend?
Comment from Bryana
Hi David, I love your poem and I love guns, like
the ones you have...in pictures. I'm petrified of
these "toys".
I like the first stanza, I would prefer a drink
better than anything else.
Have a wonderful day my friend.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Hi David, I love your poem and I love guns, like
the ones you have...in pictures. I'm petrified of
these "toys".
I like the first stanza, I would prefer a drink
better than anything else.
Have a wonderful day my friend.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, my friend. So would I!
Comment from robina1978
Excellent photo of guns that complements this poem very well. Of course I understand it is not a pro-gun poem. You built it up slowly and that end never came:)
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Excellent photo of guns that complements this poem very well. Of course I understand it is not a pro-gun poem. You built it up slowly and that end never came:)
Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thanks very much, Ine. I appreciate it!
Comment from mfowler
It's lucky you're a reasonable sorta guy. You're prepared to take the long and reasonable route from sorting out conflict over a drink to the shootout at the "it'll be OK corral". I reckon the tetrameter/ trimeter rhythm works really well in getting the mood just right for this piece.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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It's lucky you're a reasonable sorta guy. You're prepared to take the long and reasonable route from sorting out conflict over a drink to the shootout at the "it'll be OK corral". I reckon the tetrameter/ trimeter rhythm works really well in getting the mood just right for this piece.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much, my friend. As always, I really appreciate the review.
Comment from James Dooney
Oh yes. I have long believed the smith and wesson, and other such names like gloch, and heckler and koch, are often correctly referred to as jesus - they can give life, save life, and also taketh life away. Good write !
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Oh yes. I have long believed the smith and wesson, and other such names like gloch, and heckler and koch, are often correctly referred to as jesus - they can give life, save life, and also taketh life away. Good write !
Comment Written 27-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2014
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Thanks so much, James, for your intuitiveness, and your great review.