Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Flatus"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
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Comment from TOMORAL
Hah! Full of hot air indeed. How did she do that? Must not have ever ate beans! Loved this chuckle this morning. You do have a perfectly metered and rhymed sense of humor. lol
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Hah! Full of hot air indeed. How did she do that? Must not have ever ate beans! Loved this chuckle this morning. You do have a perfectly metered and rhymed sense of humor. lol
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Thanks again, TOMORAL.
Comment from Misrael
That was very cute and funny and yes some are very full of hot smelly gas but don't want to admit it because of embarrassment. keep up the good work and keep on writing.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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That was very cute and funny and yes some are very full of hot smelly gas but don't want to admit it because of embarrassment. keep up the good work and keep on writing.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Thanks, Misrael. Even though I posted that yesterday, I have to wait 24 hours before posting more on Miracle. I will work on doing that tonight. Sorry for the delay. I just had to write something else besides death, after that last scene.
Comment from Marillion
Hilarious! And one of those questions I've asked and been asked. That seems to be as a great a sign of intimacy as there is, and I love the duality of the final like, too, Aiona. Very clever poem.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Hilarious! And one of those questions I've asked and been asked. That seems to be as a great a sign of intimacy as there is, and I love the duality of the final like, too, Aiona. Very clever poem.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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"final like"? :) Thanks, Marillion. May you never be intimate with me. :)
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Oops, final LINE, I meant.
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That's okay. I took it as a Freudian compliment.
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As you should. It came from the fart. Wait...did I do it again? ;-)
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LOL!
Comment from Tomes Johnston
Ha ha. This made ne laugh on a cold February morning. I must remember this poem when someone complains about my next outburst of flatulence. Very good indeed.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Ha ha. This made ne laugh on a cold February morning. I must remember this poem when someone complains about my next outburst of flatulence. Very good indeed.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Cold air transmits sound well. :) Remember to do it under the warm covers next time and pull it over their heads.
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Ha ha. That's a good one.
Comment from Darkhorse555
This is excellent, very funny but seems an issue for some and has been brought up many times in conversation, :-), yes you would think after 20 odd years she would be bursting at the seems. good laugh great read
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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This is excellent, very funny but seems an issue for some and has been brought up many times in conversation, :-), yes you would think after 20 odd years she would be bursting at the seems. good laugh great read
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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Thank you.
Comment from country ranch writer
all the time we have been married my sister -in-law always excused her self and left the room to fart. Not like the rest of us country folk.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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all the time we have been married my sister -in-law always excused her self and left the room to fart. Not like the rest of us country folk.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2014
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A noble woman.
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she was one of a kind