Comment from TOMORAL

Excellent

Hahaha! Loved this one. It is so true. At first I thought it was a dog who was the MC. This is delightful and thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2014

Thank you, TOMORAL. :)

Comment from Misrael

Excellent

That reminds me of a poem that I wrote sometime back. It has two titles. what dogs like and the canines. If you would like to read it just look under my profile which is Misrael. I enjoyed your poem and thought it was cute. Keep on writing.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2014

Thank you, Misrael. I will look up your poem as well!

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

Yes this is a funny but true piece of writing from the author in this post. We love to sit down on the grass in parks and we might be sitting where a dog has just done his business. Many a true word is spoken in jest.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2014

Thanks, Tomes. It's good to know that a Brit can still enjoy a bit of American poop-humor, too. :)

reply by Tomes Johnston on 23-Feb-2014

I only live in Britain. I am Irish to the backbone.

reply by the author on 23-Feb-2014

Oops! My bad! :)

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Aiona - this one runs smoothly and that makes me laugh too.
Loved your last lines - just great expressive imagery I'd rather not have in my mind. Great writing though:)
Thanks for sharing,
Maureen

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014

Thanks, Maureen. It's a warm fuzzy feeling to get such a review from a high ranked poet. :D

Comment from AnnieDawn

Excellent

I don't see where you have entered this poem in any contest. You should! Very well done and the language is so common these days that youngsters use 'ass' more than adults do.
Good job and well done. I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. Keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014

Thank you. Mostly wrote it to cheer myself up! I'm glad you enjoyed it too.

Comment from N.K. Wagner

Excellent

Completely crude - and completely funny. A celebration of grass in rhymed verse. Is someone longing for the end of winter? :) Nancy

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014

Me? Naaah :)

Comment from chicken scratch love

Excellent

HaHaHa! I don't think I will have to worry about people's awkward stares when doing this...ONCE spring hits! For EVERYONE around MY parts shall be doing the exact same thing in perfect harmony...ESPECIALLY after the brutal winter WE'VE had! Thanks for the share!

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2014

Thanks! I'm ready to roll!