No Human Being
He's not human, gives love freely 2d post 1st was glitched7 total reviews
Comment from Gungalo
No human being
Unconditionally gives
All his love to me
You are lucky to have him girl. So many times when he can bring support to you. Sigh.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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No human being
Unconditionally gives
All his love to me
You are lucky to have him girl. So many times when he can bring support to you. Sigh.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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Very lucky indeed. He is one of a kind kitty.
lulube
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Smile.
Comment from Visheshta Dahiya
a lovely poem with a beautiful message .
the animal must be taken care of :)
i feel your words are great are should be spread to masses so that everyone has respect towards animals.
the prompt condition is perfectly fulfilled.
best of luck for the contest :)
Visheshta
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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a lovely poem with a beautiful message .
the animal must be taken care of :)
i feel your words are great are should be spread to masses so that everyone has respect towards animals.
the prompt condition is perfectly fulfilled.
best of luck for the contest :)
Visheshta
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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thxs for the wishes for the contest but it is over and I never really had a good shot at it cause the poem only came across in 2 lines not the 3 that it is. I didn't know this till it was over. Oh well that is why I posted it again in all 3 lines.
thxs for your comments
lulube
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welcome :)
Comment from Cajungirl
Beautiful poem and beautiful cat. You know we can learn a lot from our furry friends. Pets loves us unconditionally, they never turn their backs on us. We should realize how lucky we are to have them.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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Beautiful poem and beautiful cat. You know we can learn a lot from our furry friends. Pets loves us unconditionally, they never turn their backs on us. We should realize how lucky we are to have them.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2014
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thxs for your read and great review. I so do agree with you. I am very lucky for my Mosey.
lulube
Comment from nelliesellie
Animals have unconditional love down pat. No human being can top them. I have tried to learn from my pets. I still can not top them. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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Animals have unconditional love down pat. No human being can top them. I have tried to learn from my pets. I still can not top them. Great work. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2014
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You got that right. I never knew the intensity of my love for my little 16.5 lb.'er could ever happen. You know what I mean. I heard years ago on tv someone mentioning that they were making love to their pet. I thought sicko but ohoh.......
thxs so much for reading and I loved your comments.
lulube
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The poem flowed and connected well! The author words are clear, creative and descriptive. The last line puts the poem all together. The artwork is perfect.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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Excellent Poem! The poem flowed and connected well! The author words are clear, creative and descriptive. The last line puts the poem all together. The artwork is perfect.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2014
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OMG what an amazing review. thxs so much for reading. I'm glad that someone can appreciate a dialogue/open thinking, type of poem. wish I could say more but I usually screw myself by putting something out there that can jeopordise my entry.
Comment from Domino 2
I'd respectfully suggest you remove the distracting title from the poem's main text to give more impact to your short senryu write.
True message in that some humans may pretend to, but you're wise enough to be suspicious to a degree, and we can always rely on our pets not to let us down.
Good luck, Ted
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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I'd respectfully suggest you remove the distracting title from the poem's main text to give more impact to your short senryu write.
True message in that some humans may pretend to, but you're wise enough to be suspicious to a degree, and we can always rely on our pets not to let us down.
Good luck, Ted
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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thxs for your read and insightful comments.
also thxs for the tip never checked out the presentation end of it. ooops
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Thanks for your gracious reply. Ted
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thxs for tip done!!!
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I just took another look.
One more tip:
1) go to 'edit'
2) click 'backspace' three times AT THE START of the 1st line
3) scroll down to the END OF THE LAST LINE and click 'enter' once.
Finally, click 'save' at the bottom. This should centralise your words much better. It takes a little practice but it's worth it for presentation sake.
Cheers, Ted
Comment from LorraineK
After reading your poem, I think I need to get a cat or a dog. Unconditional love. Sounds to good to be true. Great write. LorraineK
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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After reading your poem, I think I need to get a cat or a dog. Unconditional love. Sounds to good to be true. Great write. LorraineK
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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I am a mother of one daughter, whom I love dearly but when the nest is empty there is an emptiness in your heart for that love in your daily life. I am also living alone.
I have never had such a love in my heart and never thought possible, for a pet. NO NOT A PET he's my boy!!!
thxs for your read and yes get a kitty or two, even more fun and they can be friends outside and your humor inside.