My Sweet Lullaby
To Love only You...16 total reviews
Comment from Domino 2
Very longing and romantic write, Nichola.
I hope you do more than 'share a cup of coffee', though it's a sweet idea. :-)
My fave line:
'The touch of your skin, a look in your eye'
Best wishes, Ted
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Very longing and romantic write, Nichola.
I hope you do more than 'share a cup of coffee', though it's a sweet idea. :-)
My fave line:
'The touch of your skin, a look in your eye'
Best wishes, Ted
Comment Written 17-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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Thank you, Ted. As always, very much appreciated:)
Nichola
Comment from michaelcahill
I am way behind, but finally here. This is great. It is very song like. Easy to sing and turn into a song. Wonderful sentiments and the last line is killer. Bravo. mikey
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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I am way behind, but finally here. This is great. It is very song like. Easy to sing and turn into a song. Wonderful sentiments and the last line is killer. Bravo. mikey
Comment Written 16-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2014
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I am very pleased to hear you say that. Thank you very much, Mikey.
Nichola
Comment from Pili Pubul
Another truly lovely romantic poem , I love the very natural
simple expression of what love is really about, those little
things that only the two lovers share. Pili
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Another truly lovely romantic poem , I love the very natural
simple expression of what love is really about, those little
things that only the two lovers share. Pili
Comment Written 15-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Thank you.
Nichola
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You welcome...
Comment from Jacq77
This is a beautiful and romantic poem, and I love the title you chose. Its flow and rhyme expresses your love for your sweet lullaby so well, and I really enjoyed this. Lovely photo to complement your words.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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This is a beautiful and romantic poem, and I love the title you chose. Its flow and rhyme expresses your love for your sweet lullaby so well, and I really enjoyed this. Lovely photo to complement your words.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2014
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Thank you.
Nichola
Comment from Bayberry
I enjoyed reading your soothing, romantic abab rhyming poem very much. I especially liked encountering the reference to Helen of Troy, and using 'Sweet lullaby' as a term of endearment.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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I enjoyed reading your soothing, romantic abab rhyming poem very much. I especially liked encountering the reference to Helen of Troy, and using 'Sweet lullaby' as a term of endearment.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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I am glad you picked up on that reference. Thank you for the great review.
Nichola
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You're very welcome. :-)
Comment from HL Pepper
Nice job.
The rhyming was good and the fluency was excellent throughout the entire poem.
A very beautiful poem. Thank you!
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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Nice job.
The rhyming was good and the fluency was excellent throughout the entire poem.
A very beautiful poem. Thank you!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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I am happy that you like it. Thank you for the excellent review.
Nichola
Comment from mumsyone
A song within my heart sings softly of you
Keeps me in company on colder nights
Our sharing of a cup of coffee too
A Serendipity's return delights
A subtle romantic poem that should be appreciated by the one it is written for. Good rhyme and meter and a good message.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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A song within my heart sings softly of you
Keeps me in company on colder nights
Our sharing of a cup of coffee too
A Serendipity's return delights
A subtle romantic poem that should be appreciated by the one it is written for. Good rhyme and meter and a good message.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the excellent review. I greatly appreciate it.
Nichola
Comment from Darkhorse555
singing beautifully in the mind A launching of a thousand ships, a vow To love only you, my sweet lullaby so very sweet excellent piece
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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singing beautifully in the mind A launching of a thousand ships, a vow To love only you, my sweet lullaby so very sweet excellent piece
Comment Written 15-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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Thank you for your review. I greatly appreciate it.
Nichola
Comment from TOMORAL
A very sweet love poem. I enjoyed the rhythm and flow of it. The words describe one very much in love with someone else. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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A very sweet love poem. I enjoyed the rhythm and flow of it. The words describe one very much in love with someone else. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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You're welcome. I am glad you like it. Thank you very much for your review.
Nichola
Comment from RGstar
A nice simple write. Nothing fashioned, just simple words that spell a simple act. Love should always be kept simple and in its true form, and that you have achieved with this write. nice mild abab formation.
Nothing more nothing less.
Well done,
RG
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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A nice simple write. Nothing fashioned, just simple words that spell a simple act. Love should always be kept simple and in its true form, and that you have achieved with this write. nice mild abab formation.
Nothing more nothing less.
Well done,
RG
Comment Written 14-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2014
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Thank you kindly for your review.
Nichola
