A Copper Coin
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3 total reviews
Comment from Hareem.S
I like the prologue of this novel. The chracter of Skye is very well portrayed here. The story has some vivid details. Enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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I like the prologue of this novel. The chracter of Skye is very well portrayed here. The story has some vivid details. Enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2014
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Thank you very much, I will be working on a new chapter in a couple of days. I hope you stick around to see Skye's plan unfold :)
Comment from Mark Brucato
Great story telling. Skye's best attributes were her mind and her speed....though her face wasn't too scary to look at. Her nose was a little crooked from a fight with Patti Grady in her twelfth winter, but you should have seen how Patti looked after the scuffle. Her ears had been pierced in several places by a traveling gypsy troupe and they'd magicked her ears into healing perfectly to prevent infections. She knew her hair was short and she never intended to let it grow past her shoulders. She thought herself purpose built for the rougher parts of Dys, despite being a young one. Keep it up
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2014
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Great story telling. Skye's best attributes were her mind and her speed....though her face wasn't too scary to look at. Her nose was a little crooked from a fight with Patti Grady in her twelfth winter, but you should have seen how Patti looked after the scuffle. Her ears had been pierced in several places by a traveling gypsy troupe and they'd magicked her ears into healing perfectly to prevent infections. She knew her hair was short and she never intended to let it grow past her shoulders. She thought herself purpose built for the rougher parts of Dys, despite being a young one. Keep it up
Comment Written 13-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2014
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Thank you and I'm glad that you have enjoyed it so far, I'll probably have the first chapter up by tomorrow.
Comment from judester
I love this and want more. Strong characters and a great setting. The writing is concise and puts the reader right in the thick of it. Will be looking forward to the more of Skye and her world. Bravo,great writing, Judester
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2014
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I love this and want more. Strong characters and a great setting. The writing is concise and puts the reader right in the thick of it. Will be looking forward to the more of Skye and her world. Bravo,great writing, Judester
Comment Written 13-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2014
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Thank you very much, I'm glad that I decided to continue it on now :)