Comment from James Chaima Phiri

Excellent

I guess the place where you kept the key was very safe. If you could not find it, who else could. This is nice and I wish you the best in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014

Thank you James for your lovely review and good luck wishes :) Kindest regards, Debra

Comment from joann r romei

Excellent

I hate those games, I tell you this generation has become addicted to this . It warps their brains, Im glad you lost the key,xoxo

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014

LOL Thank you joann. Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

Truly a portrait of frustration. . .and regret!
Most parents can probably relate (on some similar, or even identical) level with the vexation of this kid -vs- parent scenario!

Nicely done :-)

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014

Thanks lorraine for your great response. Kindest regards as always, Debra :)

Comment from 24chas

Excellent

I enjoyed this piece very much. The narration was so perfect and very funny as well. Great job of writing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014

Thank you 24chas for your lovely review and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)