Comment from harmony13

Excellent

Excellent poem! The author's poem is descriptive,
creative and thought provoking. The reader pondered on this poem. The artwork enhanced the read.
Thank you, harmony13

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014

Thank you, again. :)

Comment from Misrael

Excellent

Very unique poem and seems to be talking of a friendship that for some reason came to an end. Good read and keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014

Thank you.

Comment from DALLAS01

Excellent

Sounds like this is a friend who meets every criteria.
Nice rhyme and rhythm. My only suggestion is to change the font color. It is difficult to read and therefore weakens the impact of the poem.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014

Thank you. Will do.

reply by DALLAS01 on 09-Feb-2014

;.) Let me now when you change it and I will upgrade the rating.

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014

I changed it. I realized why I used pink for both background and text. She loved pink. And the subtle difference in brightness was because I wasn't sure I wanted to post it out loud. But, I love purple. And she deserves accolades. I know I can only honor her by being true to myself.

reply by DALLAS01 on 10-Feb-2014

I upgraded it. Much easier to read.

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014

Thanks. I do love purple. I'm glad my choice made it easier.

Comment from Marillion

Excellent

Nicely done. Very simple, and yet very effective in playing out the intent of the piece. It has the melancholy of the final parting of someone very important in your life, and that comes through in the piece.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2014

Thanks, Marillion.