Last call
Last night she gave him an incentive.6 total reviews
Comment from Fandoodle
Nice verse with the glass. I wasn't sure at first if the glass was your poem until you thanked helvi12 for the pic.
A little confusing but it worked. Good luck.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Nice verse with the glass. I wasn't sure at first if the glass was your poem until you thanked helvi12 for the pic.
A little confusing but it worked. Good luck.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Helvi2
Hi
This was a double your pleasure for me! I really enjoyed your poem and am also the artist of the art you chose. Your sense of humor with a bit of the bubbly is a perfect fit for the image. I am honored you chose my image and love the result of you words in combination with it.
Very Nicely Done!
Good Luck in the Contest!
:o) Helvi
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Hi
This was a double your pleasure for me! I really enjoyed your poem and am also the artist of the art you chose. Your sense of humor with a bit of the bubbly is a perfect fit for the image. I am honored you chose my image and love the result of you words in combination with it.
Very Nicely Done!
Good Luck in the Contest!
:o) Helvi
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the stellar review and for the perfect fit or the poem.
Comment from Cycler
Cute thought and lovely word choice with intoxicating and staggering (back for more). You've painted a beautiful, love-torn picture. Good luck with the contest
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Cute thought and lovely word choice with intoxicating and staggering (back for more). You've painted a beautiful, love-torn picture. Good luck with the contest
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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thank you for the kind review. I tried to stagger the words but advanced editor wouldn't accommodate me.
Comment from Rainbowsofhappiness
I love the manner in which this poem was written in response to the words in the picture that created the shape of a champagne glass! That was ingenious! This was a creative take on the proposed theme. Tying in the poem to the picture of the word-formed champagne glass further enhanced it's appeal. This poem and its accompanying picture was well thought out in both presentation and delivery. Kudos to the writer for thinking outside the box when creating this piece of eye-catching writing!
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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I love the manner in which this poem was written in response to the words in the picture that created the shape of a champagne glass! That was ingenious! This was a creative take on the proposed theme. Tying in the poem to the picture of the word-formed champagne glass further enhanced it's appeal. This poem and its accompanying picture was well thought out in both presentation and delivery. Kudos to the writer for thinking outside the box when creating this piece of eye-catching writing!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the stellar review. glad you liked it. I tried to stagger the lines but advance editor would not allow...may try one more time.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, This is an ooh-la-la poem - romantic imagery created for the reader/reviewer to expand upon. I especially liked:
sent him
staggering
back for more
(The above left me with a thought from a song ... "That's the way you know, I like it ... aha, aha - Big-teeth smile.)
Great artwork choice. I liked the use of the word "intoxicating."
As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Hello author, This is an ooh-la-la poem - romantic imagery created for the reader/reviewer to expand upon. I especially liked:
sent him
staggering
back for more
(The above left me with a thought from a song ... "That's the way you know, I like it ... aha, aha - Big-teeth smile.)
Great artwork choice. I liked the use of the word "intoxicating."
As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the great review. Glad you liked it.
Comment from vapros
Yes, indeed, you have certainly managed to tell an exciting story with the limitations of this poetry contest. Good work.
v
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Yes, indeed, you have certainly managed to tell an exciting story with the limitations of this poetry contest. Good work.
v
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.