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The Sands of Life

contest entry

15 total reviews 
Comment from nannabot
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Hi this is a beautiful poem. It has the correct word count and is very well crafted, with good rhyming. The love imagery is powerfully expressed, and it has a deep sentimental quality. "The sands of life" a powerful metaphore meaning 'eternity' bound together in love forever. Really touching.
Big hugs from nannabot. xxxx

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2014

Comment from RodG
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This isthe perfect verse for a Valentine to ONE'S wife, especially if they have been wed many years. I like the metaphor of love being like an hour glass measuring those moments of wedded bliss.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
    Thank you very much, Rod.
Comment from Fandoodle
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Good job. Sounds like a greeting card. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing it. Good luck in the contest. You must have had a great wedding.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
    Fandoodle, thank you so much.
Comment from Cycler
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Ahhh, this is so nice! Great rhyme, lovely thoughts - certainly a romantic way to start a Valentines Day - or even any day. Great job with the 15 words!

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2014

Comment from honeytree
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The art work is very special for these words

So much love is around.

Happiness forever together.

So it should be for everyone.

honey tree

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
    Thank you, Honey Tree.
reply by honeytree on 06-Feb-2014
    I am glad you liked the review.

    honey tree
Comment from rouskin
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Attractive artwork and perfect write with clear message:Our names were written upon the sands of life, the moment you
became my wife. Very enjoyable read Best of luck in your contest


 Comment Written 04-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
    thank you very much, rouskin
Comment from in777wr#
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This was a well written poem. The poem reads, and flows well. Good mental picture of names being written on the sands of life. This is a very good love poem. Nicely written.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
    in777, thank you.
Comment from Helvi2
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Not only do you have a touching poem but, the way you presented it is lovely. The Image, colors and poem ALL work together to make this special. Your wife will defintely LOVE this! Good Luck in the Contest!
:o) Helvi

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
    Helvi, thank you ever so much. :)
Comment from l.raven
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OMG this is just beautiful...those were the days...when love was truly love...I so love your poem and a beautiful picture...well written

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
    Thank you ever so much, Raven.
reply by l.raven on 04-Feb-2014
    you are so welcome...xxoo
Comment from whubbard7
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Oh this is excellent! Perfect, to be honest. I love the simple rhyme, and... well... all of it! Such a well crafted poem in so few words. Perfect for the prompt and I wish you GREAT luck!

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2014

reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
    WHubband, thank you ever so much. :)