To a son of God
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "The Mystery of The Goat"Metre ... Freeverse & Quatrain
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Comment from victor 66
Your poem seems to flow with a certain amount of sophistication and intelligence. As I am reasonably old now I find less and less need to be hypocritical. If I can't tell the truth, why should I bother to say anything. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Your poem seems to flow with a certain amount of sophistication and intelligence. As I am reasonably old now I find less and less need to be hypocritical. If I can't tell the truth, why should I bother to say anything. Best wishes.
Comment Written 13-May-2019
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Your quite right and in few words where many might confuse ... to the point ... I think is the expression we have ! Its a good job its not victor 666 ...
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Yes, it is a good job Tama
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I apologize for sending my reply before it was completed. I'll try once again. Yes, it was a good job. And I appreciate The "Victor 666".
Comment from Bleeshor
The Mystery of the Goat by Picpen is haunting. It appears the person in the poem wanted to join a group and then had second thoughts. ...secret hand shakes...beware my friend...throat severed east to west... there is foreboding in every line. Well written. I liked it.
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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The Mystery of the Goat by Picpen is haunting. It appears the person in the poem wanted to join a group and then had second thoughts. ...secret hand shakes...beware my friend...throat severed east to west... there is foreboding in every line. Well written. I liked it.
Comment Written 13-May-2019
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Excellent ... its a well travelled pen write that every mason needs to read so they can know were on the "LEVEL" so to speak ... glad you enjoyed!
Comment from susand3022
Hi Bicpen, Now this is a different type of story than one I'd think to see here! It's nice to see something new once in a while. I always thought that the Knights Templar were the protectors of the most sacred Christian artifacts... I guess they were also manipulated by the devil. "One never knows what evil lurks in the hearts of men..."
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Hi Bicpen, Now this is a different type of story than one I'd think to see here! It's nice to see something new once in a while. I always thought that the Knights Templar were the protectors of the most sacred Christian artifacts... I guess they were also manipulated by the devil. "One never knows what evil lurks in the hearts of men..."
Comment Written 13-May-2019
reply by the author on 13-May-2019
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Well ... why not worship the devil and have all his faint tainted riches when you can disguise it as Christians ... its kinda like having the best of both worlds only we know what world they really belong too.
Comment from michaelcahill
Wow. I had no idea much to my ignorant chagrin. I didn't realize they were any different than the Elks. What a horrific bunch these dudes are. A revealing and well researched revelation. A real service if you ask me to the lazy amongst us that are still grateful to know. (me) Great piece that is beautifully written as well. That is always a plus and adds credibility. mikey
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Wow. I had no idea much to my ignorant chagrin. I didn't realize they were any different than the Elks. What a horrific bunch these dudes are. A revealing and well researched revelation. A real service if you ask me to the lazy amongst us that are still grateful to know. (me) Great piece that is beautifully written as well. That is always a plus and adds credibility. mikey
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Thanks Mikey ... I have a very good researcher who actually was a Satanist and Mason of High degree, amongst other things, He has his own ministry and through his writings helped me to put some things together about my own life that did not quite add up at the time ... much blessings and take care.
Comment from sunnilicious
I saw a movie about this same subject. It's scary and covered through religious groups in Christianity. You wrote about it well. Good visual imagery. Good use of descriptive words. Nice work.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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I saw a movie about this same subject. It's scary and covered through religious groups in Christianity. You wrote about it well. Good visual imagery. Good use of descriptive words. Nice work.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Thanks Sunny ... !
Comment from tfawcus
It is no wonder that there is so much secrecy surrounding the strange rituals of freemasonry. Despite the undoubted god that the masons do, one cannot help harbouring suspicions about any organisation that feels the need for such a cloak-and-dagger existence.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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It is no wonder that there is so much secrecy surrounding the strange rituals of freemasonry. Despite the undoubted god that the masons do, one cannot help harbouring suspicions about any organisation that feels the need for such a cloak-and-dagger existence.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Many thanks ... !
Comment from Ben Colder
I have known many men who was are is Masons. I never saw the need to join a secret group. Some are so secret folks that belong forget where to meet and nobody is telling. Shalom my friend.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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I have known many men who was are is Masons. I never saw the need to join a secret group. Some are so secret folks that belong forget where to meet and nobody is telling. Shalom my friend.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Shalom ... !
Comment from 24chas
I've always heard things about the Masons, but I've never seen it written in quite this way before. Great job and some stellar research. Good job.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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I've always heard things about the Masons, but I've never seen it written in quite this way before. Great job and some stellar research. Good job.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Excellent ... much appreciate !
Comment from Amsterdam
Well used pen...
Blood it has leaked
Masonic Den...
A den of thieves.
Master Mason
Just 3 degrees
Time wasted
33rd ~they will never see
Black magic
Use of Djinns
Woolen fabrics
Den of sin
Denver International
Georgia Guide Stones
Old teds coral castle
Knowledge~ untold
Up at the top
A ZIONIST I see
Masonic lodge
Rothschilds ~House of greed
All part of Albert Pikes plan
My friend, all part of the big plan.
Thanks, for doing yours....
Am
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Well used pen...
Blood it has leaked
Masonic Den...
A den of thieves.
Master Mason
Just 3 degrees
Time wasted
33rd ~they will never see
Black magic
Use of Djinns
Woolen fabrics
Den of sin
Denver International
Georgia Guide Stones
Old teds coral castle
Knowledge~ untold
Up at the top
A ZIONIST I see
Masonic lodge
Rothschilds ~House of greed
All part of Albert Pikes plan
My friend, all part of the big plan.
Thanks, for doing yours....
Am
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Anytime Am ... !
Comment from MM lives on :)
wow Bic, I see the Mason's secret blend of blasphemy and mastery into a sort of card game of deceit and trickery behind a wall of infamy and an oath of the Goat indeed
BIC I LOVED THIS POEM BROTHER...EVERY LINE BUILT PERFECT!
EXCEPTIONALLY A MASTERY :)!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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wow Bic, I see the Mason's secret blend of blasphemy and mastery into a sort of card game of deceit and trickery behind a wall of infamy and an oath of the Goat indeed
BIC I LOVED THIS POEM BROTHER...EVERY LINE BUILT PERFECT!
EXCEPTIONALLY A MASTERY :)!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Excellent ... glad you enjoyed otherwise I'd be going BOOM.
