To a son of God
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Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I love the spellings and wordings. You did a great job friend and I wish I had this kind of faith. I think sometimes we all need to fall on our knees but something not too many of us can do on a daily basis
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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I love the spellings and wordings. You did a great job friend and I wish I had this kind of faith. I think sometimes we all need to fall on our knees but something not too many of us can do on a daily basis
Comment Written 05-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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many thanks
Comment from DionysusDeVille
I loved this poem for its absolute honesty as the speaker begs questions seeking guidance from the one he worships. A very powerful poem
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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I loved this poem for its absolute honesty as the speaker begs questions seeking guidance from the one he worships. A very powerful poem
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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EXCELLENT: many thanks
Comment from MM lives on :)
Bic, you had me for a second there saying WTF is this style but once I get the pun of it all and the cynical genius it is a rebel rousing delight buddy! I had a goldfish named Heeesuuus once a Mexican goldfish.
Keys- knees, LOL...dowt...ha ha ha ha ha ..!
LOVED IT 77777777777777777777777777777777 STARS!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Bic, you had me for a second there saying WTF is this style but once I get the pun of it all and the cynical genius it is a rebel rousing delight buddy! I had a goldfish named Heeesuuus once a Mexican goldfish.
Keys- knees, LOL...dowt...ha ha ha ha ha ..!
LOVED IT 77777777777777777777777777777777 STARS!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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LOL ... LOL ... LOL ... LOL ... LOL ... LOL !!!
Comment from Janie King
This is very well-done. I'm not a poet so I never try to review on a poetic style. This is very thought provoking. God loves you and so do I.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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This is very well-done. I'm not a poet so I never try to review on a poetic style. This is very thought provoking. God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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many thanks
Comment from livelylinda
Bicpen: Yes, I understood that what I was reading was fresh and creative, brilliant perhaps. An approach to religion I've never seen before, as my memory serves me or doesn't. . .good write. livelylinda
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Bicpen: Yes, I understood that what I was reading was fresh and creative, brilliant perhaps. An approach to religion I've never seen before, as my memory serves me or doesn't. . .good write. livelylinda
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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many thanks
Comment from Caressa_08
Yes, to be doubtful, can be a path to faith...And, oh, the test is always ongoing...This was a good read for me, & thanks for the author notes to clarify things...Some, picture to get our attention, & I like it, along with, To a son of God
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Yes, to be doubtful, can be a path to faith...And, oh, the test is always ongoing...This was a good read for me, & thanks for the author notes to clarify things...Some, picture to get our attention, & I like it, along with, To a son of God
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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EXCELLENT many thanks
Comment from RalphNater
Great poem. i really like the layout and form of stanzas. The last line was very thought provoking. Great work and hopefully your dowt and worry will be gone.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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Great poem. i really like the layout and form of stanzas. The last line was very thought provoking. Great work and hopefully your dowt and worry will be gone.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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many thanks
Comment from tfawcus
There is good reason for Doubting Thomas to figure so strongly in the bible stories for he is the archetype for all of us. Who can truly say that they never have a moment of doubt?
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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There is good reason for Doubting Thomas to figure so strongly in the bible stories for he is the archetype for all of us. Who can truly say that they never have a moment of doubt?
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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many thanks
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
I think you had fun writing this and put us to the test of having to read it. Have you been texting too much and you have got into the habit of text speak. Everybody doubts I should think. Shouldn't let it worry you. I don't think you needed the author notes - I think everybody must have known no one was that bad at spelling. An interesting read. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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I think you had fun writing this and put us to the test of having to read it. Have you been texting too much and you have got into the habit of text speak. Everybody doubts I should think. Shouldn't let it worry you. I don't think you needed the author notes - I think everybody must have known no one was that bad at spelling. An interesting read. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 04-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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many thanks
Comment from GWHARGIS
I could picture an uneducated person talking to Jesus on his knees. The questions, same as those from theologians, would have worked their way out of him. I liked the style of this. Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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I could picture an uneducated person talking to Jesus on his knees. The questions, same as those from theologians, would have worked their way out of him. I liked the style of this. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2014
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many thanks
