Serendipity of Spring
Spring Codette Poem7 total reviews
Comment from Sueellen11
Well one my friend,,,Great entry into this contest,,you have met its requirement and painted a lovely picture with your imagery,, your chosen picture matches perfectly,,well done,,good luck,,blessings sueellen
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Well one my friend,,,Great entry into this contest,,you have met its requirement and painted a lovely picture with your imagery,, your chosen picture matches perfectly,,well done,,good luck,,blessings sueellen
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
Comment from Janie King
This is a very enjoyable and pleasant read. The picture is perfect for the theme of the poem. Good luck in the prompt. God loves you and so do I.
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This is a very enjoyable and pleasant read. The picture is perfect for the theme of the poem. Good luck in the prompt. God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
Comment from harmony13
Great Contest Entry! The poem flowed and connected well.
The author's words are creative, descriptive and clear.
The artwork is perfect and compliments the poem.
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Great Contest Entry! The poem flowed and connected well.
The author's words are creative, descriptive and clear.
The artwork is perfect and compliments the poem.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Looks interesting? I never of this type of poem. Looks like fun, thanks for the author notes. Was your first line suppose to be spaced, dividing the couplet? I'm new to this new form, to me, poetry. I like the green, harmonious with the season of spring. I can almost smell the freshness and beauty of spring, as I digest this lovely poem. Good luck in the contest ... thanks for your mentoring, I like this poem wackydo
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Looks interesting? I never of this type of poem. Looks like fun, thanks for the author notes. Was your first line suppose to be spaced, dividing the couplet? I'm new to this new form, to me, poetry. I like the green, harmonious with the season of spring. I can almost smell the freshness and beauty of spring, as I digest this lovely poem. Good luck in the contest ... thanks for your mentoring, I like this poem wackydo
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
Comment from kalstorytlr
Since I don't know much about this form of poetry, I'm a bit hesitant to give advice. However, I do think that you need to rethink the word "throughout" in the first line and change it to "through the." I also think you should add the word "are" between "they" and "ready" so that it flows better. Other than that, I think it's quite pretty and your choice of artwork is very nice.
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Since I don't know much about this form of poetry, I'm a bit hesitant to give advice. However, I do think that you need to rethink the word "throughout" in the first line and change it to "through the." I also think you should add the word "are" between "they" and "ready" so that it flows better. Other than that, I think it's quite pretty and your choice of artwork is very nice.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
Comment from jadapenn
Codette: This is a new discovery for me too. It doesn't have meter I hope. Your entry is terrific, Author. I loved reading the serendipity of Spring. The live wriggles within it. You can feel the freshness in the air as all the spring activity evolves. Well done and best wishes for the contest. luv jada
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Codette: This is a new discovery for me too. It doesn't have meter I hope. Your entry is terrific, Author. I loved reading the serendipity of Spring. The live wriggles within it. You can feel the freshness in the air as all the spring activity evolves. Well done and best wishes for the contest. luv jada
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
Comment from kiwisteveh
You have used the new form well to describe the anticipation of spring.
I liked 'floriferous explosions'
Best of luck in the contest.
Steve
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You have used the new form well to describe the anticipation of spring.
I liked 'floriferous explosions'
Best of luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
