To a son of God
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "The Mystery of The Serpent's Head"Metre ... Freeverse & Quatrain
9 total reviews
Comment from michaelcahill
Powerful piece that should raise some eyebrows. The truth always does. I can hear the sound though of those same eyes clacking shut in denial. A good thing to bring to the light of day. Really well written as well, that helps burn the images and insights into the brain. Good skills make a big difference when revealing anything. Well done, mikey
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Powerful piece that should raise some eyebrows. The truth always does. I can hear the sound though of those same eyes clacking shut in denial. A good thing to bring to the light of day. Really well written as well, that helps burn the images and insights into the brain. Good skills make a big difference when revealing anything. Well done, mikey
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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THANKS ONCE AGAIN MIKEY GLAD YOU CAN APPRECIATE THIS ONE AND ENJOY ITS POETIC TALE.
Comment from livelylinda
Bicpen: there you go again, stirring up mysteries which we usually would ignore because it is way bigger than us! Good write. This one also stirs the mind as we ponder exactly what goes on behind the walls of the Vatican? It is really all prayer and contemplation and service or are illegal and unthinkable things happening? livelylinda
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Bicpen: there you go again, stirring up mysteries which we usually would ignore because it is way bigger than us! Good write. This one also stirs the mind as we ponder exactly what goes on behind the walls of the Vatican? It is really all prayer and contemplation and service or are illegal and unthinkable things happening? livelylinda
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Well from what I know and here the aint much reverence in there !!!
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good use of the abab rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with cost/lost. Good descriptive word use that creates a clear image in my mind. Good complimentary photo followed by a message that contains no errors.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Good use of the abab rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with cost/lost. Good descriptive word use that creates a clear image in my mind. Good complimentary photo followed by a message that contains no errors.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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EXCELLENT thank you righteous one much appreciate the review.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Five well written stanzas. Yes, this poem is undoubtedly based on truth, though many would prefer to turn a blind eye. Your first stanza is very relevant at the moment as a great number of unholy truths are surfacing as I write. Many will prefer to ignore what you write but sordid truths should be revealed. Such a hypocritical existence some people lead. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Five well written stanzas. Yes, this poem is undoubtedly based on truth, though many would prefer to turn a blind eye. Your first stanza is very relevant at the moment as a great number of unholy truths are surfacing as I write. Many will prefer to ignore what you write but sordid truths should be revealed. Such a hypocritical existence some people lead. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Thanks Dorothy glad you can appreciate !!!
Comment from Jean Lutz
I think this is the second piece I have read from your book. Both intriguing. After reading this one, I wonder if you have read the writings of Malachi Martin? Some called him a heretic -- others a prophet. I highly recommend "Windswept House". I say he was a prophet; would love to hear your thoughts. You can find some of his books in a public library.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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I think this is the second piece I have read from your book. Both intriguing. After reading this one, I wonder if you have read the writings of Malachi Martin? Some called him a heretic -- others a prophet. I highly recommend "Windswept House". I say he was a prophet; would love to hear your thoughts. You can find some of his books in a public library.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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INTRESTING I WILL AT SOME POINT INVESTIGATE ALTHOUGH i HAVE MY OWN STUDY MATERIAL THAT I WORK FROM.
Comment from chicken scratch love
Just chilling! The photo is very disturbing, just as I'm sure he was. Nice flow and consistency with your rhyming lines. Thanks for the share!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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Just chilling! The photo is very disturbing, just as I'm sure he was. Nice flow and consistency with your rhyming lines. Thanks for the share!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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Anytime ... much appreciated !
Comment from trevorletang
A powerfully written poem that is profound and very thought provoking while at the same time somewhat educational. Great work on this one I have enjoyed the read
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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A powerfully written poem that is profound and very thought provoking while at the same time somewhat educational. Great work on this one I have enjoyed the read
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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Excellent ... then it has done its job !
Comment from Keturah Martin
This writing is grammatically correct and uses vivid description throughout. It depicts the truth of some things that sadly happens behind closed doors. It is always good to expose evil rather than hide it. God bless you for writing as freely as you have here .
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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This writing is grammatically correct and uses vivid description throughout. It depicts the truth of some things that sadly happens behind closed doors. It is always good to expose evil rather than hide it. God bless you for writing as freely as you have here .
Comment Written 31-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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Much appreciated ... many thanks !
Comment from lakeport
The Serpent's head, indeed that's a very heartfelt expressed
poem, very nice rhyming, Thanks for sharing it. God bless you.lakeport.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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The Serpent's head, indeed that's a very heartfelt expressed
poem, very nice rhyming, Thanks for sharing it. God bless you.lakeport.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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Thank you !
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your welcome.lakeport.
