Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

Good complimentary photo that fits this piece perfectly. The Bible says My son, despise not the chastening of the Lord; neither be weary of his correction: For whom the Lord loveth he correcteth; even as a father the son in whom he delighteth. I like this. Good job.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014

Thanks, brother. God bless, Dennis

Comment from LoannaLois

Excellent

Now there is a nice, "come in on". My Gram would call thoughts that came out of nowhere...but were meaningful,"come in ons". They come in on your world for a reason. Nice writing and the first part is very sweet...

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014

I like that "come in on"... I believe the good ones come from God and are a result of meditating on the Word of God. Thanks for reading and commenting. Dennis

Comment from mrskristinball

Excellent

Very brief, yet powerful. The message of love is clear in the correction...and how do we see it, as a condemnation or loving discipline? Excellent work, interesting and thought-provoking.

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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014

It's crucial that we see correction for what it is...the loving hand of God preparing us for future usefulness and JOY! God bless, thanks for reading and commenting, Dennis