A Book of ... Free Verse (Vol.1)
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Comment from poetadeu
Mental illness can be devastating for the patient
and for his family, also. Like any disease it has
a long arm that grips tight without let go. I
admire your expert writing ability and the art
was an added arrow from satan's bow.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Mental illness can be devastating for the patient
and for his family, also. Like any disease it has
a long arm that grips tight without let go. I
admire your expert writing ability and the art
was an added arrow from satan's bow.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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cool ... much obliged.
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LOL::}} Joyce
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LOL::}} Joyce
Comment from MM lives on :)
Bic, wow this was a profound poem indeed...may I add the author's notes compliment the overall effect and affect of this message...the man and the machine is a phenom metaphor to display our battle with mental afflictions...senses dulled and our pretense is now null...like a walking living zombie doll to societal poison...yes these delivers of evil...these representatives fill a ravenous and deadly prescriptive arrow throw our synoptic marrow...cranial mind f...k.
WOW ...To me this has so many layers of metaphorical magic.
7 Stars to a man who I deem a genius and profound writer... M salutes you. with love and respect to my dear brother and friend Bic.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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Bic, wow this was a profound poem indeed...may I add the author's notes compliment the overall effect and affect of this message...the man and the machine is a phenom metaphor to display our battle with mental afflictions...senses dulled and our pretense is now null...like a walking living zombie doll to societal poison...yes these delivers of evil...these representatives fill a ravenous and deadly prescriptive arrow throw our synoptic marrow...cranial mind f...k.
WOW ...To me this has so many layers of metaphorical magic.
7 Stars to a man who I deem a genius and profound writer... M salutes you. with love and respect to my dear brother and friend Bic.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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Thanks M much appreciate maybe youll like the next one ... lol.
Comment from ragamuffin
Well and intensely stated. "It's time for the man to resist/the mind of the machine." An excellent line and an excellent idea. Thought provoking and I believe an ever so true statement on much of what occurs within the mind of the machine that is "the powers that be," especially the elected powers that be.
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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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Well and intensely stated. "It's time for the man to resist/the mind of the machine." An excellent line and an excellent idea. Thought provoking and I believe an ever so true statement on much of what occurs within the mind of the machine that is "the powers that be," especially the elected powers that be.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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... maybe you'll like my next release lol. P.S. much appreciated for the review and glad you like.
