A Collection of Dennis Clough's Wit
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Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Denis,
sound thought process delivers a sound result.
I believe you hit this one right on the scone... 'cause we all think this way, don't we?
But after all the rusty, clunky, junky. this poem hit it's mark, not only in rhyme, but in intent.
Work it til' it works!
Thanks for sharing your art Dennis.
With our thoughts we create...
process in motion.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Hi Denis,
sound thought process delivers a sound result.
I believe you hit this one right on the scone... 'cause we all think this way, don't we?
But after all the rusty, clunky, junky. this poem hit it's mark, not only in rhyme, but in intent.
Work it til' it works!
Thanks for sharing your art Dennis.
With our thoughts we create...
process in motion.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you James, your review is appreciated. 😀
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My pleasure Dennis.
Comment from kiwisteveh
An amusing and certainly true little poem about the art of writing.
The true gift is to be able to see (and hear) which words are big fat ballons and baboons and which are the graceful flying flock.
Nice inventive take on a writer's dilemma.
Steve
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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An amusing and certainly true little poem about the art of writing.
The true gift is to be able to see (and hear) which words are big fat ballons and baboons and which are the graceful flying flock.
Nice inventive take on a writer's dilemma.
Steve
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thanks Steve, very much appreciated!
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
I have the same problem. Right now I have no incentive to write. I'm very busy setting up an online store to sell my books and cards I make. I'm making cards rather than write, I love making cards, crafting and being creative with my hands as much as I love writing. Is that allowed? Anyway this is well done as always. Rox
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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I have the same problem. Right now I have no incentive to write. I'm very busy setting up an online store to sell my books and cards I make. I'm making cards rather than write, I love making cards, crafting and being creative with my hands as much as I love writing. Is that allowed? Anyway this is well done as always. Rox
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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No, it's not alright! You shall write...get thee to thy keyboard! Sorry, just trying to get you a little extra incentive...surely you can do both? Thanks, Dennis
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Well I am working on a story for a contest, but I'm just not sure about it so haven't posted it. It's not Super Pig that's for sure, has blood and guts and stuff. =} Was kind of fun for a change.
Comment from zanya
This one raises a chuckle and really conveys the sense of trying to muster all those words in our writer's brain as they 'tumble about'. Nice pic
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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This one raises a chuckle and really conveys the sense of trying to muster all those words in our writer's brain as they 'tumble about'. Nice pic
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much...sometimes it seems like a wrestling match...it's nice to win once in a while too Dennis
Comment from Petriesan
really cool pic - where did you find it?
my words don;t behave so well.
nice description of what we deal with when we attempt to put thought and emotion onto paper
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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really cool pic - where did you find it?
my words don;t behave so well.
nice description of what we deal with when we attempt to put thought and emotion onto paper
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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The picture came from Google...thanks for reviewing. Continue to wrestle those words into place...:) Dennis
Comment from MoIronE13
The life and times of a writer.
Where does inspiration come from??
and where does it go??
As long as we're trying there will be a flow!!!
Keep on keeping on..
Thanks for sharing humor..
Peaceful 2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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The life and times of a writer.
Where does inspiration come from??
and where does it go??
As long as we're trying there will be a flow!!!
Keep on keeping on..
Thanks for sharing humor..
Peaceful 2014
Comment Written 30-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Cesspools flow too...pure springs are better. Dennis
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Much!!!
Comment from Acquired Taste
Any writer on this site will agree with you.
Just waiting for them to take flight - at times - will make you weak in the knees and pray for resolution.
Read smoothly.
AT=/
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Any writer on this site will agree with you.
Just waiting for them to take flight - at times - will make you weak in the knees and pray for resolution.
Read smoothly.
AT=/
Comment Written 29-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2014
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Amen! I like your profile quotes...Mark Twain said, "Everybody is ignorant, just on different subjects." Thanks for reading and commenting, Dennis
Comment from rouskin
Excellent artwork and well penned poem with good flow and rhyme throughout the poem Enjoyable read.Thank you for sharing and have a great week Really well done.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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Excellent artwork and well penned poem with good flow and rhyme throughout the poem Enjoyable read.Thank you for sharing and have a great week Really well done.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much, glad you like it. Dennis
Comment from Sasha
This is so very true and something all writers experience. This flows very smoothly and the rhyme is spot on too. Great work with this one.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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This is so very true and something all writers experience. This flows very smoothly and the rhyme is spot on too. Great work with this one.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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Thank you Smurphgirl! You are appreciated around here...Dennis
Comment from Spitfire
I'm betting all writers can connect with this one. Great use of consonance with heavy, rusty, clunky and junky. These words fit the sound of that stanza. LOL
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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I'm betting all writers can connect with this one. Great use of consonance with heavy, rusty, clunky and junky. These words fit the sound of that stanza. LOL
Comment Written 29-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2014
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They are also my bread and butter. Thank you! Dennis
