A Collection of Dennis Clough's Wit
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Comment from lancellot
Funny, and You knew we could all relate to the price of posting at times, and the site wanting more of our real dollars. Well done.
Who is Tom, really?
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Funny, and You knew we could all relate to the price of posting at times, and the site wanting more of our real dollars. Well done.
Who is Tom, really?
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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I have to believe that there may be a real Tom but since he seems to be ubiquitous, he must have a thousands stand-ins who promptly answer any question. Thanks for the review. Dennis
Comment from jmdg1954
Good story. I like how it was written in all dialogue. That is tricky to do.
Your story is based on many truths as we all probably look at other sights thinking the grass is greener there,
Nicely done. John
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Good story. I like how it was written in all dialogue. That is tricky to do.
Your story is based on many truths as we all probably look at other sights thinking the grass is greener there,
Nicely done. John
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Thanks John!
Comment from N.K. Wagner
This little conversation is inspired, Deniz. Should have saved it for an all-dialog prompt. Nice touch - the phony "my computer died" excuse. A great stopping place. :) nancy
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This little conversation is inspired, Deniz. Should have saved it for an all-dialog prompt. Nice touch - the phony "my computer died" excuse. A great stopping place. :) nancy
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
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:) Thanks so much, Nancy.
Comment from christianpowers
Hi Den,
Great idea, and good execution. (I probably would have given the FS voice more of a 'streetwalker mentality' - You know, only wanting you for what you'll give her with even less loyalty than you have, a 'what have you done for me lately' type.) Still, you thought of this interesting angle, and it's a good one.
Very entertaining. Thanks for the laugh.
Christian
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Hi Den,
Great idea, and good execution. (I probably would have given the FS voice more of a 'streetwalker mentality' - You know, only wanting you for what you'll give her with even less loyalty than you have, a 'what have you done for me lately' type.) Still, you thought of this interesting angle, and it's a good one.
Very entertaining. Thanks for the laugh.
Christian
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Yeah, I'm sure it would have gone in a different direction...but thanks for reading and commenting sans six-shooter. LOL Den
Comment from mfowler
This is a very entertains conversation. It smacks of a little angst over FS, but it could just be your devilish sense of humour. I like that bit where you complain about how long it takes to get a piece up for 70 cent piece up. True enough. Your flirtatious chatter with 'Tom' is very funny.
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This is a very entertains conversation. It smacks of a little angst over FS, but it could just be your devilish sense of humour. I like that bit where you complain about how long it takes to get a piece up for 70 cent piece up. True enough. Your flirtatious chatter with 'Tom' is very funny.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and commenting. :)
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is cute, deniz, you did an excellent job writing this story about the wanderlust that got the customer in trouble with the administrator, lol. i enjoyed reading it...
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this is cute, deniz, you did an excellent job writing this story about the wanderlust that got the customer in trouble with the administrator, lol. i enjoyed reading it...
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Thank you so much...I just noticed the passing of your mother on your profile page...may God comfort you in your loss. Dennis
Comment from Spitfire
Fantastic! You're excellent at dialogue, Dennis. Great confrontation which brings up one important argument:
I've nurtured you from a lump of coal into a...a polished piece of coal...from a puppy, to a real dog of a writer."
Love the spat about money. Also, the sexy overtones. A winner, for me.
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Fantastic! You're excellent at dialogue, Dennis. Great confrontation which brings up one important argument:
I've nurtured you from a lump of coal into a...a polished piece of coal...from a puppy, to a real dog of a writer."
Love the spat about money. Also, the sexy overtones. A winner, for me.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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:) You don't know how close I came to mentioning you as an attraction to stay on FS! LOL Thanks, Dennis
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I'm flattered. A great big hug to you. :-)
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hug received and returned...()
Comment from 24chas
I really enjoyed this piece, Deniz22. I think everyone here can relate to this work. I've just come back after being gone for about 3 years.
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I really enjoyed this piece, Deniz22. I think everyone here can relate to this work. I've just come back after being gone for about 3 years.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Well welcome back, fellow wanderer! :) LOL Thanks for the review! Dennis
Comment from Gungalo
LOL this is a riot Deniz. Plenty of true fun in here. LOL don't know but I sure hope you got your computer back. If not, contact them. Heheh.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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LOL this is a riot Deniz. Plenty of true fun in here. LOL don't know but I sure hope you got your computer back. If not, contact them. Heheh.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
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LOL A fun write...glad you liked it! Dennis
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Fun for sure Den.
Comment from emrpoems
Good love affair but an expensive one . Tom says hey do no set a price.The writers do. We are the ones who decide what we are willing to pay
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Good love affair but an expensive one . Tom says hey do no set a price.The writers do. We are the ones who decide what we are willing to pay
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Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Thanks...:)
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Thanks...:)
