Ego
This 5-7-5 says about human Ego. I hope that you all welcome2 total reviews
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is an interesting and unusual 5-7-5. I suppose that Ego will refrain from throwing a stone on the water because it will mess up the image of his face? Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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This is an interesting and unusual 5-7-5. I suppose that Ego will refrain from throwing a stone on the water because it will mess up the image of his face? Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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thank you
Comment from Gravell
This is a good 5-7-5 poem as your syllable count adheres to the rules. So well done in that. Your poem would've been better though if it had a picture. Your title and the contents of the poem seems to be a mismatch as your poem doesn't have much relevancy. Great use of onomatopoeia in your first line creating a lively effect.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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This is a good 5-7-5 poem as your syllable count adheres to the rules. So well done in that. Your poem would've been better though if it had a picture. Your title and the contents of the poem seems to be a mismatch as your poem doesn't have much relevancy. Great use of onomatopoeia in your first line creating a lively effect.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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thank you
