5-7-5 No place like home.
Tailored to my liking, a customized fit.7 total reviews
Comment from Pilot2Pen
I breathe in serenity
That is a great line. You've penned an excellent poem to go with a beautiful picture. Good luck.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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I breathe in serenity
That is a great line. You've penned an excellent poem to go with a beautiful picture. Good luck.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BeasPeas
A wonderful 5-7-5 and I identify with your words of love for your home. First line: "wrapped" and "embrace." Second line: "breathe in serenity." These sum it up and prepare the reader for the third: "my love." Very nice.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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A wonderful 5-7-5 and I identify with your words of love for your home. First line: "wrapped" and "embrace." Second line: "breathe in serenity." These sum it up and prepare the reader for the third: "my love." Very nice.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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Thanks or reviewing.
Comment from l.raven
I love this poem...it tells you a surreal your casa(home) is to you...and if it looks anything like this picture it is beautiful...I love the snow...very well written
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I love this poem...it tells you a surreal your casa(home) is to you...and if it looks anything like this picture it is beautiful...I love the snow...very well written
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2014
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I wish it looked like that. Thanks for reviewing.
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You are so welcome...xxoo
Comment from Jackarrie
I like this 5-7-5 poem, all the syllables correct. I like the line mi casa I love. I usually say mi casa es su casa, when i welcome somebody. A home is a place to really love.
Well done, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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I like this 5-7-5 poem, all the syllables correct. I like the line mi casa I love. I usually say mi casa es su casa, when i welcome somebody. A home is a place to really love.
Well done, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mickbey
This is a nice image, a beautiful scene and easy to see why it is a place 'to love,' the illustration sets the tone and the poem captures the feeling for it in pleasing imagery, this poem is easy and enjoyable to absorb, nice work, good luck.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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This is a nice image, a beautiful scene and easy to see why it is a place 'to love,' the illustration sets the tone and the poem captures the feeling for it in pleasing imagery, this poem is easy and enjoyable to absorb, nice work, good luck.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rhonny
you have written this poem very well and its metaphors work so nicely too. you have stuck to the required form. artwork compliments the poem.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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you have written this poem very well and its metaphors work so nicely too. you have stuck to the required form. artwork compliments the poem.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Val Crisson
I'm a "home body" myself, and this little poem creates a very cozy and serene example of a wonderful home. Which is a very close and personal love, in my mind at least. One question, should "Mi" be "Mia" or is it a gender translation?
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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I'm a "home body" myself, and this little poem creates a very cozy and serene example of a wonderful home. Which is a very close and personal love, in my mind at least. One question, should "Mi" be "Mia" or is it a gender translation?
Comment Written 26-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2014
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Wasn't sure. Have seen it both ways. Thanks for reviewing.