New Blessings
The only way it will work20 total reviews
Comment from seaglass
Your 5-7-5 poem is profound. it is not only correctly written per prompt but it speaks a page full in three lines. A life full of love crowds out fear, hate and bitterness, and yes, worry as well
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Your 5-7-5 poem is profound. it is not only correctly written per prompt but it speaks a page full in three lines. A life full of love crowds out fear, hate and bitterness, and yes, worry as well
Comment Written 16-Jan-2014
Comment from Jackarrie
new blessings found her
when she asked LOVE to enter
and asked fear to leave
Your wonderful poem reminds me of the poem I heard with the author unknown well done Mary
She wouldn't try for fear she'd die
She didn't try and so she died.
She wouldn't try for fear she'd die
But when she tried he FEARS they died.
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new blessings found her
when she asked LOVE to enter
and asked fear to leave
Your wonderful poem reminds me of the poem I heard with the author unknown well done Mary
She wouldn't try for fear she'd die
She didn't try and so she died.
She wouldn't try for fear she'd die
But when she tried he FEARS they died.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2014
Comment from 24chas
I really enjoyed this piece, LoannaLois. The message in it was spectacular as was the way you got so much meaning out of just a few words. Nice job.
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I really enjoyed this piece, LoannaLois. The message in it was spectacular as was the way you got so much meaning out of just a few words. Nice job.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2014
Comment from Gungalo
new blessings found her
when she asked LOVE to enter
and asked fear to leave
You got that right Loanna. A wonderful releasing of the fear.
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new blessings found her
when she asked LOVE to enter
and asked fear to leave
You got that right Loanna. A wonderful releasing of the fear.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2014
Comment from skye
Fear destroys so much. Love needs the absence of fear to thrive. Your poem describes the possibilities, and your choice of art is perfect. The scatterings of color remind us of how we need to choose.. one over the other. I am glad you chose love.
Excellent.
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Fear destroys so much. Love needs the absence of fear to thrive. Your poem describes the possibilities, and your choice of art is perfect. The scatterings of color remind us of how we need to choose.. one over the other. I am glad you chose love.
Excellent.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2014
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hello Poet,
This was a beautiful thought, for love truly changes are perception of the world around us when we let it take control of our hearts. Well thought out and delivered...best of luck, Bill
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Hello Poet,
This was a beautiful thought, for love truly changes are perception of the world around us when we let it take control of our hearts. Well thought out and delivered...best of luck, Bill
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
Comment from judiverse
I wonder why this is not under the "poetry" listing, as the contest calls for a love story written as a poem. Beautifully done and in the proper 5-7-5 format. The flow is lovely, and I like the thought about fear leaving when love entered. A lot said in a few words. judi
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I wonder why this is not under the "poetry" listing, as the contest calls for a love story written as a poem. Beautifully done and in the proper 5-7-5 format. The flow is lovely, and I like the thought about fear leaving when love entered. A lot said in a few words. judi
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi,
a wonderful message of hope... love is indeed the leveler where fear is concerned... an inspiring set of words.
All the best in this contest, a strong and well constructed 5-7-5.
With our thoughts we create,
room to love,
James.
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Hi,
a wonderful message of hope... love is indeed the leveler where fear is concerned... an inspiring set of words.
All the best in this contest, a strong and well constructed 5-7-5.
With our thoughts we create,
room to love,
James.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
Comment from visionary1234
This is lovely and tells a 'story' within your poem - though I noticed you've entered it in the 'fiction'/ prose section by mistake??
:)S
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This is lovely and tells a 'story' within your poem - though I noticed you've entered it in the 'fiction'/ prose section by mistake??
:)S
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
Comment from rouskin
The photo compliments the piece well as the words bring the photo to life. Best of luck in your contest. Thank you for sharing and have a great week
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The photo compliments the piece well as the words bring the photo to life. Best of luck in your contest. Thank you for sharing and have a great week
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
