Love comes in all shapes and sizes
family means love38 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
OMG...I love this...things truly change when a family comes along...there is so much love to share...I love your and the picture is so cute
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OMG...I love this...things truly change when a family comes along...there is so much love to share...I love your and the picture is so cute
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
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Thank you very much
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so welcome...xxoo
Comment from Ben Colder
The poem is good and speaks well of true love in such a short 17 syllables. Good luck in the contest. The photo tells it all. Blessings
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The poem is good and speaks well of true love in such a short 17 syllables. Good luck in the contest. The photo tells it all. Blessings
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
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Thank you very much
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Bravo! I have never given six stars to a tiny 575, but this one has earned my last six of the week. It is SO VERY TRUE. The quickest way to grow up and became an adult is to become a parent. :)
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Bravo! I have never given six stars to a tiny 575, but this one has earned my last six of the week. It is SO VERY TRUE. The quickest way to grow up and became an adult is to become a parent. :)
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
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Comment from DALLAS01
Think this deserves a six. Great combination of photo and verse. You have managed to present a lesson in selflessness. This is what it is all about. Good luck in the contest.
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Think this deserves a six. Great combination of photo and verse. You have managed to present a lesson in selflessness. This is what it is all about. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
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You're welcome.
Comment from judiverse
This is beautiful, and I'm sure it speaks to a lot of young people. Having your freedom is great, but that little baby makes things special. You write this in perfect 5-7-5 format, and it flows smoothly. Last line is wonderfully worded. Best of luck in the contest. judi
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This is beautiful, and I'm sure it speaks to a lot of young people. Having your freedom is great, but that little baby makes things special. You write this in perfect 5-7-5 format, and it flows smoothly. Last line is wonderfully worded. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
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Thank you very much
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Hi, lancellot. You are so welcome. judi
Comment from paulah60
A wonderful little 'love story', not the cliched, schmaltzy kind we expect! That you've rhymed it is a bonus.
Indeed, our understanding of love shifts with our progeny, and even more so, with THEIR progeny. I expect you'll do very well in the contest with this piece.
Cheers
Paula
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A wonderful little 'love story', not the cliched, schmaltzy kind we expect! That you've rhymed it is a bonus.
Indeed, our understanding of love shifts with our progeny, and even more so, with THEIR progeny. I expect you'll do very well in the contest with this piece.
Cheers
Paula
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
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Comment from poetbear
It is sweet and endearing.
Great image!
Very touching but it reminds me what we couldn't have in a vey happy 33 year marriage.
We wanted it but it wasn't ppssible sp please know that some will be hurt reading this though I am over the moon for you.
Adoptin isn't for everybpdy.
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It is sweet and endearing.
Great image!
Very touching but it reminds me what we couldn't have in a vey happy 33 year marriage.
We wanted it but it wasn't ppssible sp please know that some will be hurt reading this though I am over the moon for you.
Adoptin isn't for everybpdy.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
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Comment from abbasjoy
Love this post, and the picture is priceless. Indeed, love does come in all shapes and sizes, and we often don't choose who are the ones to love, because many times it's our family, and goodness knows sometimes we wish we could choose them or not.
Cute and well written.
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Love this post, and the picture is priceless. Indeed, love does come in all shapes and sizes, and we often don't choose who are the ones to love, because many times it's our family, and goodness knows sometimes we wish we could choose them or not.
Cute and well written.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
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Comment from Leineco
Great use of the 5-7-5 form
I fell in love with this immediately!
17 little syllables, and an entire saga was sent :-)
Bravo!
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Great use of the 5-7-5 form
I fell in love with this immediately!
17 little syllables, and an entire saga was sent :-)
Bravo!
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
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Comment from skye
Such a great love poem. We are selfish indeed before the babies come, and then we learn to give and love more than we ever thought possible.
Excellent.
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Such a great love poem. We are selfish indeed before the babies come, and then we learn to give and love more than we ever thought possible.
Excellent.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
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