Lava is to Erupt
Dealing with Anger Issues18 total reviews
Comment from DonandVicki
Rage is something that I have always had a lot of trouble dealing with. Your poem deals quite well with the subject. Thank you for the read. Don
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
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Rage is something that I have always had a lot of trouble dealing with. Your poem deals quite well with the subject. Thank you for the read. Don
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014
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Thank you so very much for the kind words and for stopping by, much appreciated...dark lord
Comment from Keturah Martin
The imagery in this poem is good as is the fact that the writer can write out the emotions of the soul. No matter where you have been, what your experience, or the depth of your pain there is hope, life and love because of the Great Physician Jesus! God bless.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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The imagery in this poem is good as is the fact that the writer can write out the emotions of the soul. No matter where you have been, what your experience, or the depth of your pain there is hope, life and love because of the Great Physician Jesus! God bless.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the fantastic review, I greatly appreciate it...dark lord
Comment from allborn66
This is a very powerful piece. The word choice is quite vivid. It inspires emotions in the reader. You communicate your theme well.
Barbara
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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This is a very powerful piece. The word choice is quite vivid. It inspires emotions in the reader. You communicate your theme well.
Barbara
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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I thank you so very much for the kind words, I appreciate it...dark lord
Comment from L.A.Matthies
Wow ...you've conveyed a feeling of pure torment exceptionally well! I certainly would hesitate to stand in your path, though I do root for you to stand up to the hatred! You see, I'm pulled in by your words ...nice job!
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Wow ...you've conveyed a feeling of pure torment exceptionally well! I certainly would hesitate to stand in your path, though I do root for you to stand up to the hatred! You see, I'm pulled in by your words ...nice job!
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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WOW! Thank you so very much for the kind words and for stopping by. Much appreciated...dark lord
Comment from c_lucas
Losing one's temper causes one to lose inner peach. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Losing one's temper causes one to lose inner peach. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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I thank you my friend. Always special hearing from you...dark lord
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You're welcome, Dark Lord. Charlie
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
For a biographical poem this is surely a very sombre and destructive poem. We all get angry but I do not think the anger you describe in this well written poem is healthy. All I can say is I hope no-one is near you when your anger erupts and that it soon peters out. Four stanzas in free verse and I hope the writing of this poem has subdued you. Well written with some very descriptive phrases. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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For a biographical poem this is surely a very sombre and destructive poem. We all get angry but I do not think the anger you describe in this well written poem is healthy. All I can say is I hope no-one is near you when your anger erupts and that it soon peters out. Four stanzas in free verse and I hope the writing of this poem has subdued you. Well written with some very descriptive phrases. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 12-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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Thank you so very much for the insight and the care that you display. I appreciate it very much...dark lord
Comment from keyanna123
This was a very powerful, creative piece. Love the picture, It compliments the poem quite well. The last stanza was my favourite because its so moving. Great job.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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This was a very powerful, creative piece. Love the picture, It compliments the poem quite well. The last stanza was my favourite because its so moving. Great job.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014
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I thank you so very much for the kind words, much appreciated...dark lord
Comment from kiwijenny
Dare I say this was lava ly ........rage wears red well ...good font choice...
I like a good vent and this is it
Well done
God bless
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Dare I say this was lava ly ........rage wears red well ...good font choice...
I like a good vent and this is it
Well done
God bless
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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WOW! Thank you so very much for the kind words. I appreciate the time you took to review my writing...dark lord
Comment from adewpearl
good alliteration in fuel the fire
and in twisting and turning and in Hell is Heaven
effective expression of intense raw emotion
in phrases like wrath that dwells within my rotting soul
good assonance in rising to a height
effective imagery of the erupting lava
Brooke
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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good alliteration in fuel the fire
and in twisting and turning and in Hell is Heaven
effective expression of intense raw emotion
in phrases like wrath that dwells within my rotting soul
good assonance in rising to a height
effective imagery of the erupting lava
Brooke
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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WOW! Thank you so very much for the kind review. I try to add a lot of imagery as to spark the meaning and feelings that I have. Thank you for stopping by, much appreciated...dark lord
Comment from livelylinda
Dkirdmcches: your poetry is so real that I feel I am reading words directly from the Devil. It is downright creepy. I will not review any more of them because I don't want you to guide me to the Other Side. livelylinda
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Dkirdmcches: your poetry is so real that I feel I am reading words directly from the Devil. It is downright creepy. I will not review any more of them because I don't want you to guide me to the Other Side. livelylinda
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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I thank you for stopping by and reviewing my work. All of my writing is biographical and it helps me regain my life...dark lord
