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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
The most thrilling and ultimately tragic day in my life! What a great twist in the end. Of course, not everyone is ready to take on a child, one that will take all your money with your blessing. Lol. They cost us a fortune, well not mine, their children are now costing THEM fortunes!!goodness.
Well done, once more, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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The most thrilling and ultimately tragic day in my life! What a great twist in the end. Of course, not everyone is ready to take on a child, one that will take all your money with your blessing. Lol. They cost us a fortune, well not mine, their children are now costing THEM fortunes!!goodness.
Well done, once more, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 09-May-2022
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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Thank you, Sandra.
Comment from EMB
What a way to bring in a little one. Taxis can be nasty things to ride in, and I'm thinking it's not sanitary enough to deliver a baby. I hope that's not what you meant by "tragic."
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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What a way to bring in a little one. Taxis can be nasty things to ride in, and I'm thinking it's not sanitary enough to deliver a baby. I hope that's not what you meant by "tragic."
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the positive review.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello Bill. Well at least you got to witness first hand what it feels like to be pregnant, in the back of a cab and pushing out life. Bravo! xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2014
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Hello Bill. Well at least you got to witness first hand what it feels like to be pregnant, in the back of a cab and pushing out life. Bravo! xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 21-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2014
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Thank you for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from BeasPeas
Image is terrific to accompany your story. Reader gets caught up in the plight of the couple and the taxi driver. Although the ending is ambiguous, it leads to the belief that something didn't work out as planned, setting the stage for a longer story.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014
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Image is terrific to accompany your story. Reader gets caught up in the plight of the couple and the taxi driver. Although the ending is ambiguous, it leads to the belief that something didn't work out as planned, setting the stage for a longer story.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the positive review.
Comment from adewpearl
I assume from the final sentence that Annie dies? or some other horrible event involving the family takes place after this dramatic baby delivery. You certainly have piqued my curiosity. Brooke
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014
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I assume from the final sentence that Annie dies? or some other horrible event involving the family takes place after this dramatic baby delivery. You certainly have piqued my curiosity. Brooke
Comment Written 04-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014
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Thank you, Brooke, for the positive review.
Comment from Janie King
Thrilling and tragic day of your life..? makes one feel as if something went wrong. Kind of an Alfred Hitchcock feel. Good luck in the prompt. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014
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Thrilling and tragic day of your life..? makes one feel as if something went wrong. Kind of an Alfred Hitchcock feel. Good luck in the prompt. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the positive review and greeting.
Comment from victor 66
I am always in awe that some one can say so much in so few words. I thought that I have had some pretty bad things happen to me in my life, but never this. Such events do take place. It was an impressive read. Wish you the best of luck and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014
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I am always in awe that some one can say so much in so few words. I thought that I have had some pretty bad things happen to me in my life, but never this. Such events do take place. It was an impressive read. Wish you the best of luck and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the positive review.
Comment from Treischel
You tell a compelling Tale about a taxi birth in traffic, then leave us hanging about a suggested further tragedy. Keeps us guessing. Good write!
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014
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You tell a compelling Tale about a taxi birth in traffic, then leave us hanging about a suggested further tragedy. Keeps us guessing. Good write!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Smoothiecool
great picture for story
good luck in the contest
your words allow the reader to see and feel the scene in the taxi of the birth of your child and the trill of it
don't know why the most tragic as this is not shown
cheers SC
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014
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great picture for story
good luck in the contest
your words allow the reader to see and feel the scene in the taxi of the birth of your child and the trill of it
don't know why the most tragic as this is not shown
cheers SC
Comment Written 04-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014
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Thank you for reviewing. I included the first sentence to create a lone situation.
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welcome
Comment from tfawcus
This works well as a 'teaser' to get someone hooked into a longer story, but it also stands quite well alone There is a complete event here though I expect there may be more of a story to come!
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014
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This works well as a 'teaser' to get someone hooked into a longer story, but it also stands quite well alone There is a complete event here though I expect there may be more of a story to come!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014
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Thank you for taking the time to review.