Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "My Husband, My Hubby"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
29 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Your husband is a marvellous man, he always gives you a helping hand, he is always there, when you need love and care, you love appreciating your hubby being a Parkinson patient; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Your husband is a marvellous man, he always gives you a helping hand, he is always there, when you need love and care, you love appreciating your hubby being a Parkinson patient; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
Comment Written 31-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thank you for reviewing this poem, too. I hope you have someone equally special in your life.
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Excellent. Where have you been? I don't recall reading any of your poems.
You write the kind of poetry I am partial to, rhyme. This is a wonderful tribute to your husband. You should get lots of kudos from him for this.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Excellent. Where have you been? I don't recall reading any of your poems.
You write the kind of poetry I am partial to, rhyme. This is a wonderful tribute to your husband. You should get lots of kudos from him for this.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review, your input and comments. I really appreciate it and treasure it.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful offering in tribute to a man that sounds like one in a million!! ;) I would only suggest, perhaps, for a smoother flow in your fourth line and sliding into the second quatrain, you have 'my loving hubby's always'... please feel free to ignore! ;) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) ;)
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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A wonderful offering in tribute to a man that sounds like one in a million!! ;) I would only suggest, perhaps, for a smoother flow in your fourth line and sliding into the second quatrain, you have 'my loving hubby's always'... please feel free to ignore! ;) :) Thanx for sharing! ;) ;)
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review and for your helpful input. It was quite simple to change. I put gladly instead of always. Sounds good doesn't it?
Comment from Darlene BoClair
I like knowing that this poem was written more than several go ago that you appreciate your spouse for all he has done and still fighting for all that he is yet to do. Your words speck of the unconditional love and marriage vows that a couple shares with the support from each other. I know that comforts of this illness has not always been welcoming, Yet I do know when loves shows when both love together. God bless
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
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I like knowing that this poem was written more than several go ago that you appreciate your spouse for all he has done and still fighting for all that he is yet to do. Your words speck of the unconditional love and marriage vows that a couple shares with the support from each other. I know that comforts of this illness has not always been welcoming, Yet I do know when loves shows when both love together. God bless
Comment Written 29-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your delightful review. Your input is great and I like your comments on unconditional love. A good remin.der to ponder.
Comment from Sara R.
BEAUTIFUL. You describe a wonderful relationship that you have with your husband and the kind of person you need. We invest our hearts in marriage and we reap what we sow.
Sara R.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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BEAUTIFUL. You describe a wonderful relationship that you have with your husband and the kind of person you need. We invest our hearts in marriage and we reap what we sow.
Sara R.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful reaction to me poem. It takes the love of God to manage marriage and that takes a miracle.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very heart felt poem about fighting with Parkinson's disease with the love of a very good husband. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery. Thank you for sharing! May God bless you both! Teri
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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This is a very beautiful and very heart felt poem about fighting with Parkinson's disease with the love of a very good husband. You used very good descriptive words and lovely imagery. Thank you for sharing! May God bless you both! Teri
Comment Written 25-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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Thank you so much for your beautiful reaction to my poem, as Parkinson's disease is difficult but with God's help nothing is impossible.
Comment from Badger_29
I'm giving this 6 because of its purest form its rhyme scheme with the ironic ending. Tells a great story, and with the description that's added shed a tear. I know I'm second reading, I believe guides is a slant rhyme with light. Knowing that you have achieved at this level fascinating writing after battling Parker's for 10 years is a outstanding accomplishment in another soft I applaud you.
So glad glad I happened upon this during bonus reviewing.
Blessings,
Brother Badger cull
Darren
PS I went through my head and I found the two that I thought were similar in my portfolio one is called torrent about emotions and the other is called the Angels use brushes about clouds. I'd be happy to copy and paste those to you and your message
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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I'm giving this 6 because of its purest form its rhyme scheme with the ironic ending. Tells a great story, and with the description that's added shed a tear. I know I'm second reading, I believe guides is a slant rhyme with light. Knowing that you have achieved at this level fascinating writing after battling Parker's for 10 years is a outstanding accomplishment in another soft I applaud you.
So glad glad I happened upon this during bonus reviewing.
Blessings,
Brother Badger cull
Darren
PS I went through my head and I found the two that I thought were similar in my portfolio one is called torrent about emotions and the other is called the Angels use brushes about clouds. I'd be happy to copy and paste those to you and your message
Comment Written 25-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2019
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I've been checking all the reviews on my poem but it seems seems like your review didn't appear. Can you confirm this to me?
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Yes, this was this review I wrote for your poem about your husband.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Gudbjorb, your poem is beautifully penned. I can feel the love, joy, and gratitude within.
I especially liked:
Love is tranquil and love is kind,
the purest form we seldom find.
(Well stated)
Lovely artwork choice. A beautiful tribute to your husband. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Hello Gudbjorb, your poem is beautifully penned. I can feel the love, joy, and gratitude within.
I especially liked:
Love is tranquil and love is kind,
the purest form we seldom find.
(Well stated)
Lovely artwork choice. A beautiful tribute to your husband. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 20-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for your heartfelt review, it really touched my heart. I'm honoured to have you following my poems and I'm really glad you like them.
Comment from Ricky1024
My husband my hubby is a dedicated piece for the writer's husband who helps her fight her Parkinson's disease he lends a helping hand any is there always for her it was well written we could semen imagery as well as objective and subjective content it flowed well with no grammar issues and great descriptive measures which we're clear thanks for this talk to Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2017
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My husband my hubby is a dedicated piece for the writer's husband who helps her fight her Parkinson's disease he lends a helping hand any is there always for her it was well written we could semen imagery as well as objective and subjective content it flowed well with no grammar issues and great descriptive measures which we're clear thanks for this talk to Ricky 1024
Comment Written 10-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review, I am really honoured. With kindness, Gb
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a lovely poem written for a special man.
Well done and thank you for sharing this poem with us.
The picture is beautiful as well.
Sharon
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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This is a lovely poem written for a special man.
Well done and thank you for sharing this poem with us.
The picture is beautiful as well.
Sharon
Comment Written 02-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much for your wonderful words about my poem and I'm happy that they are an inspiration to you. With Kindness, Gb