Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Welcome to FanStory--I hope the site fulfills your goal for membership. Where is Kano?

I enjoyed your 5-7-5--I feel the same way about chocolate! (I think the apostrophe got dropped in "That's".) I liked that you included alliteration. Best wishes in the contest. -Joan

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2013

Comment from reconciled

Good

this ahh is really good effort...-smile-....how do you know chocolate is the gods food...and what gods would that be anyway. this was god awfully good...-wink-...well that's one in the bucket...congratulations. love Michael

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2013

thanks dear, means a lot

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Good

Hey. My best friends are missionary teachers with Campus Crusade in Nigeria.
This is a 5-7-5. Go with your syllables.
"It does taste good"=="It tastes very good" it-tastes-ver-ry-good-5
"Yes, it is the god's food"=="It is the food of the god's"-7
"That's my chocolate"==that's-my-choc-o-late-5

Go to the info next to your profile and then to styles of poetry.
That helped me

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2013

Thanks Barb. Correction noted. You must be very proud of your friends. Thanks again

Comment from Darkhorse555

Excellent

beautifully crafted words It does taste good Yes, it is the gods' food Thats my chocolate shows the sweet tooth for chocolate

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2013

Thank you so very much

Comment from donaldcolson

Excellent

Nice use of this style of poetry tho I would prefer something a bit more meaningful. Room for elaboration of chocolate and eros, sexuality. sensuality. etc

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2013

Thanks Donald! will work on the elaboration aspect.

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

My chocolate, indeed it tasts good and is hard to resist,
that's a heartfelt 5/7/5 poem.Thanks for sharing it, God bless you.Lakeport.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2013

Thank you so much! God bless you too

reply by lakeport on 04-Dec-2013

your welcome.thank you, lakeport.

Comment from Petriesan

Excellent

god's or god's? Just kidding around.

Chocolate is proof that someone or something loves people

nice use of the prescribed form

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2013

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2013

Thanks Petriesan!