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26 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
That's the sentimental mush belonging on greeting cards. So romantic... Well thought out and clearly written. Fantastic visual imagery created. Great poetic format. Nice work.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2013
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That's the sentimental mush belonging on greeting cards. So romantic... Well thought out and clearly written. Fantastic visual imagery created. Great poetic format. Nice work.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2013
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Sentimental mush...Lol...that's true!! Thank you so much, very kind words...best to you
Comment from c_lucas
Love is the bonding agent that is tough enough to last forever and tender enough to shatter with a tear drop. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2013
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Love is the bonding agent that is tough enough to last forever and tender enough to shatter with a tear drop. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2013
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Thank you for your kind words, much appreciated.
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You're welcome, AG. Charlie
Comment from Jade Lawson
And only through my heart may you stay and live within
its beating embrace till the end of time ~ ... I love this line. This is a very sweet poem, quite heartfelt, I could feel the might of love in each line and beautiful word choice. The picture compliments it.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2013
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And only through my heart may you stay and live within
its beating embrace till the end of time ~ ... I love this line. This is a very sweet poem, quite heartfelt, I could feel the might of love in each line and beautiful word choice. The picture compliments it.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2013
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Thank you very much for your kind words...Best to you!!
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You're welcome x
Comment from kiwijenny
Beautiful..........faithful and true to your love.....but you put it like this.....and only through my heart may you stay and live within .
It's beating embrace till the end of time.....
Well,done
God bless
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2013
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Beautiful..........faithful and true to your love.....but you put it like this.....and only through my heart may you stay and live within .
It's beating embrace till the end of time.....
Well,done
God bless
Comment Written 03-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2013
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Thank you for you nice complimentary review :)
Comment from fastdigits
An artistic journey down the road
of love where looking into the eyes,
down into the depths of the very soul
as you hold a loved one in your arms
and where this love will forever live
until the end of time.
Poetic words that flow down the screen
Well done
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2013
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An artistic journey down the road
of love where looking into the eyes,
down into the depths of the very soul
as you hold a loved one in your arms
and where this love will forever live
until the end of time.
Poetic words that flow down the screen
Well done
Comment Written 03-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much for reading and for your kind and considerate words.
Comment from ravenblack
Like how you relate the heart to the previous lines, "in my arms..." with "it's beating embrace to the end of time". This poem speaks of deep love.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2013
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Like how you relate the heart to the previous lines, "in my arms..." with "it's beating embrace to the end of time". This poem speaks of deep love.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much, so much speaks from our heart of hearts. <3
Comment from heyjude
Annie Gale, what a lovely romantic poem. I especially
like the last part ... and only through my heart may
you stay and live within its beating embrace till the
end of time. Love should be forever .
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2013
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Annie Gale, what a lovely romantic poem. I especially
like the last part ... and only through my heart may
you stay and live within its beating embrace till the
end of time. Love should be forever .
Comment Written 03-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2013
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Thank you for reading my poem and you're right, love should be forever <3 Love your pen name heyjude!!
Comment from victor 66
I can't think of anything better than to be truly in love. I don't know if love lasts forever but I know the feeling does. Good luck with your writing.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2013
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I can't think of anything better than to be truly in love. I don't know if love lasts forever but I know the feeling does. Good luck with your writing.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much and I agree with you on that.
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good complimentary photo that grabs my attention from the start. Good alliteration with deep/drown...my/may...embrace/end...till/time. This piece contains a message filled with strong passion which holds my attention from start to finish. Good work.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2013
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Good complimentary photo that grabs my attention from the start. Good alliteration with deep/drown...my/may...embrace/end...till/time. This piece contains a message filled with strong passion which holds my attention from start to finish. Good work.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2013
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Thank you very much for reading and your kind words.
Comment from honeytree
I love the art work and the words written here.
Love is so special within our lives.
To love someone and be loved in return
Is the perfect gift for us all.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2013
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I love the art work and the words written here.
Love is so special within our lives.
To love someone and be loved in return
Is the perfect gift for us all.
Honey tree
Comment Written 03-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2013
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Love is the perfect gift, Thank you!!
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Love does make us feel very happy.
Honeytree
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I liked what you wrote very much.
Honeytree