The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Let Go, & Let God! Everyday Living."Subtitle: God Never Lets Go!
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Comment from Mustang Patty
another colorful chapter of the story of your life with Louise. It sounds like you have been both blessed and cursed with your neighbors. It is always that way - you can't pick the people that will be living beside you. Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
reply by the author on 17-May-2017
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another colorful chapter of the story of your life with Louise. It sounds like you have been both blessed and cursed with your neighbors. It is always that way - you can't pick the people that will be living beside you. Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
Comment Written 17-May-2017
reply by the author on 17-May-2017
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Yeah Sis the neighbours in number 50 are probably a whole novel all on their own. What idea for the future. I was told this chapter is a bit large, and I have already split it. Will let you know as I will add more pictures! Thanks for the great review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Getting old is horrible, isn't it? My heart and my head are willing but my body says, "That ain't gonna happen!" LOL I really enjoyed reading this post.
reply by the author on 17-May-2017
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Getting old is horrible, isn't it? My heart and my head are willing but my body says, "That ain't gonna happen!" LOL I really enjoyed reading this post.
Comment Written 17-May-2017
reply by the author on 17-May-2017
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Thanks Sis. getting nearer the end. Have had some comments that this chapter is a bit long I have already split this chapter can show you the split privately if you like? Once the review certificates are finished I may re-edit but I won't put it up for review again. I always wanted to add more pictures and the chapter split will allow me to do that.
Lord Bless and thanks.
Comment from MelB
I hope the neighbor boy didn't think you were avoiding him because he was molested. I can certainly understand you didn't want to be accused of the same. You could have done supervised visits with Louise or a witness. I'm sure your neighbors weren't moving away from you, but on to other things. There is a thing called a 7 year itch, meaning most people want to move every 7 years. I think almost everyone has been stolen from. He will be accountable for it. I think it teaches us something though too.
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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I hope the neighbor boy didn't think you were avoiding him because he was molested. I can certainly understand you didn't want to be accused of the same. You could have done supervised visits with Louise or a witness. I'm sure your neighbors weren't moving away from you, but on to other things. There is a thing called a 7 year itch, meaning most people want to move every 7 years. I think almost everyone has been stolen from. He will be accountable for it. I think it teaches us something though too.
Comment Written 13-May-2017
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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Thanks Sis. I hope one day when he is fully grown I can tell him why things went the way they did. I can't vouch,for his Mom's honesty in the matter,it is too difficult for Louise to come with ne next door, access wise. He is studying accountancy, that much I know.
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I hope you do explain it to him, so he doesn't feel rejected or like he did something wrong. It sounds like the mom may have a few problems of her own.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
This is a very good read.
Well-written.
Nicely polished.
--When my grandmother was alive (before the strokes) I used to push her in the wheelchair cart when we'd go to Walmart. Now, they have power chair carts.
The author's notes are appreciated. Thank you.
The artwork is outstanding. Those are words to live by.
Thanks for sharing a part of your book.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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This is a very good read.
Well-written.
Nicely polished.
--When my grandmother was alive (before the strokes) I used to push her in the wheelchair cart when we'd go to Walmart. Now, they have power chair carts.
The author's notes are appreciated. Thank you.
The artwork is outstanding. Those are words to live by.
Thanks for sharing a part of your book.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 13-May-2017
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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Hi sis, much appreciate your review. This chapter will be split as it has been suggested it is too long...I will also add my collection of pictures to the new half chapter. No need to review but you will like the photos😃
Comment from Thomas Bowling
You're drifting into the too long posts again. This could be much shorter.
One snag:
The word "Gipsy" comes to mind.
"Gypsy"
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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You're drifting into the too long posts again. This could be much shorter.
One snag:
The word "Gipsy" comes to mind.
"Gypsy"
Comment Written 13-May-2017
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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Hi Mate, yeah I had tried to keep them shorter. Same advice as I have given a dear old friend who I have helped a lot on here. She seems to post these great long chapters to her fiction and expects people to review them for pittances rewards. I could have a go at splitting this up as there were more pictures I would have liked to add. Appreciate the "Heads up" and spag catch. Let you know when I make the change.
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Hey I split the chapter from your recommendation read this again and the new Chapter on a free promotion.
Comment from c_lucas
Neighbors come and go. Each home has its own story. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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Neighbors come and go. Each home has its own story. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 13-May-2017
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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Thanks, Bro, might split this chapter as someone has suggested I had more pictures I would like to add anyway. still missing you. I am due to go into hospital, myself again soon for removal of a BCC this time off my forehead. Waiting till Louise gets sorted with her Rehab she is starting soon. Not sure how much you know she partially tore her Right Rotator Cuff in her shoulder. Not good when you depend on your arms more as she does with CP.
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In February I underwent surgery for a right shoulder replacement and to repair the torn rotor cup.
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Yuck Bro so you know what Louise is going through. praying her situ is not as bad as yours. This was her first time in Hospital since she was 9. Please pray they can move her to Rehab ASAp the current location is not real comfortable. Noisy Geriatric woman.
Comment from royowen
There's little honour abroad in the community, I'm not even that sure about everybody in the church is completely honest either. We have been fortunate with neighbours over the years, qmodt have been great, the girls even met and had lifelong friends here in this streets, well done, Geoff, blessings. Roy
Typo : I (would) often go on my "diabetic" walks to the shop and back.
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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There's little honour abroad in the community, I'm not even that sure about everybody in the church is completely honest either. We have been fortunate with neighbours over the years, qmodt have been great, the girls even met and had lifelong friends here in this streets, well done, Geoff, blessings. Roy
Typo : I (would) often go on my "diabetic" walks to the shop and back.
Comment Written 13-May-2017
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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Thanks Bro appreciate the review will work on the spags.
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Welcome bro
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Whipper snapper to us is an old term for youngster. Romans 12:19 is one ofmy favorite verses and i love that you put it there. Exceptional writing and loved the tellng along with the pain of neighbors. lol
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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Whipper snapper to us is an old term for youngster. Romans 12:19 is one ofmy favorite verses and i love that you put it there. Exceptional writing and loved the tellng along with the pain of neighbors. lol
Comment Written 13-May-2017
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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Yeah you are right about Whipper Snapper we use that too this is Whipper Snipper hehe. Thanks trying to get my lovely siggy working for responses to reviews. Tom won't let us use them on Reviews but we can on Responses hehe.
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Hi barb here is that Siggy I wanted to share thanks for the great review. Hope you saw the other one in case you didn't we use Whipper Snapper for young folks too this was a Whipper Snipper..hehe Thanks
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Hi barb here is that Siggy I wanted to share thanks for the great review. Hope you saw the other one in case you didn't we use Whipper Snapper for young folks too this was a Whipper Snipper..hehe Thanks
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written chapter. We try our best to make our lives working as smooth as possible. We sometimes cause ourselves much distress in trying to do God's work. We only need to let go and trust God.
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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A very well-written chapter. We try our best to make our lives working as smooth as possible. We sometimes cause ourselves much distress in trying to do God's work. We only need to let go and trust God.
Comment Written 13-May-2017
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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Thanks, Sis much appreciate your lovely review. First cab off the rank again. I should start getting my siggy out again but not sure I can use them on reviews. let me see. Ah well not today have to update my photobucket sign in.
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Hi Sis thanks for the lovely review. I did post before but I wanted to add my Siggy and I had to refresh my password on photobucket. Thanks to Dean Kuch for this.
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Hi Sis thanks for the lovely review. I did post before but I wanted to add my Siggy and I had to refresh my password on photobucket. Thanks to Dean Kuch for this.
Comment from chasennov
The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go Let Go, & Let God Everyday Living. Well I read another chapter of the ongoing things happening to everyone on a daily basis. Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2014
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The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go Let Go, & Let God Everyday Living. Well I read another chapter of the ongoing things happening to everyone on a daily basis. Well done.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2014
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thanks friend had a really deep review of my first chapter and working on more info for that could end up being extra 2 chapters if interested let you know later. I do remember you were interested in keeping up on my stuff. Thanks again.
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You are welcome.