Gods Brightest Star
We are meant to shine..Even then the brightest star..!!!2 total reviews
Comment from phoenix13447
I love this poem. I would suggest that in the second line you might put in before need. It is a wholesome and lovely concept and especially delightful for a believer like me. Thank you for sharing this
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2013
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I love this poem. I would suggest that in the second line you might put in before need. It is a wholesome and lovely concept and especially delightful for a believer like me. Thank you for sharing this
Comment Written 12-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2013
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful review..I will look at your suggestion..Thank you..
Comment from rcbeatson
I do like the emotion involved and the positive outcome of the poem. I had to read it twice though as it was a little confusing. It did not flow smoothly. Nice use of adjectives though.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2013
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I do like the emotion involved and the positive outcome of the poem. I had to read it twice though as it was a little confusing. It did not flow smoothly. Nice use of adjectives though.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2013
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful consideration..I will check to see where I might be able to smooth it out.
