My Really Truly Christmas Songs
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "First Christmas"A Collection of my own Compositions for Christmas
37 total reviews
Comment from mikemagine
This is beautiful, man! Yes, it would be even better to hear it, but I read it aloud and I LIKE! "Go Tell It On The Mountain" might be my absolute favorite Christmas carol, but I expect this too sounds quite good!
Peace,
Mike
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2014
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This is beautiful, man! Yes, it would be even better to hear it, but I read it aloud and I LIKE! "Go Tell It On The Mountain" might be my absolute favorite Christmas carol, but I expect this too sounds quite good!
Peace,
Mike
Comment Written 31-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2014
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Glad you like them be nice when you heaqr them too!
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Yes, I easily imagine:-)
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a well written carol that tells why be celebrate Christmas which is the birth of Jesus.
If you sing or know someone who can write music you should do a audio to add to this.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2014
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This is a well written carol that tells why be celebrate Christmas which is the birth of Jesus.
If you sing or know someone who can write music you should do a audio to add to this.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 31-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2014
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Hi friend there is an audio link on it did you not hear that? Or are you saying an choral version? Thanks for coming by.
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You're welcome. The audio link isn't working on my computer. But I was talking about a choral link.
dragonpoet
Comment from Selina Stambi
Very nicely done, my friend.
You are a talented man. I love this celebration of Christmas - in March!
Look forward to more.
Sonali :)
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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Very nicely done, my friend.
You are a talented man. I love this celebration of Christmas - in March!
Look forward to more.
Sonali :)
Comment Written 07-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2014
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hehe well we are certain He was not born in December we think possibly September. Thanks for the visit.
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You are a very amusing gentleman! :) :):)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I had to read the song without the music. It seems I am out dated or something with my real player. I will have my son look at it before I go farther.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
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I had to read the song without the music. It seems I am out dated or something with my real player. I will have my son look at it before I go farther.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
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Great would love you to hear the mu7sic they are all on a Carols page on our church website can send you the link if that might help.
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I will have my son update whatever I need.
Comment from c_lucas
I am not that knowledgeable in the Fanstory Browser, but if you study HTML colors, you should be able to get the color you want. This is very well written.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
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I am not that knowledgeable in the Fanstory Browser, but if you study HTML colors, you should be able to get the color you want. This is very well written.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
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Thanks mate been a while since I looked at this one will get back an see what we can do. Appreciate your review.
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You're welcome, Sankey. Charlie
Comment from cinderbella
The font color is okay, I wouldn't know how to advise you on it because I have always used the editor, I just keep experimenting with it until something looks okay. lol
I love the carol you wrote, it has a nice rhythm and you have kept the meaning of Christmas intact while everyone is talking about gifts and turkey dinners. Artwork is great. Loved it. :) Sandra
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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The font color is okay, I wouldn't know how to advise you on it because I have always used the editor, I just keep experimenting with it until something looks okay. lol
I love the carol you wrote, it has a nice rhythm and you have kept the meaning of Christmas intact while everyone is talking about gifts and turkey dinners. Artwork is great. Loved it. :) Sandra
Comment Written 08-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Thanks mate I thought the art work was good too. I wanted a scene where Mary (bless her the hand maiden of the Lord) was not "hallowed" I thin k the font colour is different now to what I had before I had a bright red colour and it made it a bit hard to read.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a nice Christmas song. The music is beautiful and I think it works well with the words. The problem with using red and green together is they both carry about the same strength so when used together it makes reading the type hard. I would suggest using a tint of green in a custom color rather than the darker green. The Sap green is very dark and nice but if I used that I would use white letters. A bright blue would go well with the picture with white letters.
I see I reviewed this before and I see it isn't red and green as it was the first. I love music and I see the rhyme. Good Job.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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This is a nice Christmas song. The music is beautiful and I think it works well with the words. The problem with using red and green together is they both carry about the same strength so when used together it makes reading the type hard. I would suggest using a tint of green in a custom color rather than the darker green. The Sap green is very dark and nice but if I used that I would use white letters. A bright blue would go well with the picture with white letters.
I see I reviewed this before and I see it isn't red and green as it was the first. I love music and I see the rhyme. Good Job.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2013
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Thanks Beth appreciate advice. It originally had a bright red font and WAS hard to read as the original reviewer correctly stated. Been pleased with my self that I learned how to do the font colours now hehe.
Comment from Norbanus
A fine Christmas Carol you've created here. I'm glad to see someone has started thinking about Christmas in a way other than trying to sell gifts. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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A fine Christmas Carol you've created here. I'm glad to see someone has started thinking about Christmas in a way other than trying to sell gifts. Nicely done.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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Thanks mate. I put a no9te on the Profile about how to use the colours for fonts in Advanced editor this mo9rning as well. Appreciate the fine review.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
The lead up to the feast of Christmas is a
magical time of year.
It is great to see the focus of this Christmas
carol placed squarely on the birth of Jesus.
Very well written and presented well.
Yes, I like the background much better.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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The lead up to the feast of Christmas is a
magical time of year.
It is great to see the focus of this Christmas
carol placed squarely on the birth of Jesus.
Very well written and presented well.
Yes, I like the background much better.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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Thanks for the review. Learned from another FS member how to do the background colour and all yesterday too. Even Tom the heads honcho says thee are no instructions for it Groan!
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Not sure if I asked if you heard the music I put with it. There are others in the book I have now put them all in.
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is a beautiful Christmas Carol that the author has created here. It is a bit early, but I suppose that it will be here before we know it. I will have to start thinking of presents soon. I am lost.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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This is a beautiful Christmas Carol that the author has created here. It is a bit early, but I suppose that it will be here before we know it. I will have to start thinking of presents soon. I am lost.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2013
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Well friend as I said I did it and the others that are there (more to coe too) because I got ticked off at how folks have forgotten the real "Reason For the Season" Cheers. and Thanks for coming by.
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Well said.
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Not sure if I asked if you heard the music I put with it. There are others in the book I have now put them all in.
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No, my internet options blocked it.
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Sorry you couldn't hear the music remind me to send you a link to the Carols page on the Church Web Site hopefully you can hear it on there.
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See if you can read and hear them on this from our church site. I put this page up every year usually 1st of December then it comes down First Week of January.
http://nepeanbaptistoz.witnesstoday.org/Carols-Songs.html
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Sorry, I can't at work.
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Do I have a private e-mail for you? write me at sankey48@yahoo.com.au
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Sorry, I don't have much time. I can only do this at work, in my free time I am always busy working on the house and have no time for the internet. I hope you understand.
