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second chance

pesonal life dramas

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Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
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This is a very interesting story in its own right and definitely tells a story that should make those that drink think a second time about doing it for driving drunk is deadly and has killed the guilty and the innocent. God loves you and I do too.















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Comment from Ric Myworld
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Sounds like a hot time in the old town last night. I know nothing about poetry, but I like the style with no capitols for punctuation, letting the words speak for themselves. Thank for a nice read!
















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Comment from joneau2
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Interesting ... a self portrait? If so, it's good you stopped drinking. Yes, too many of us get carried away with wanting to feel good, at any expense, and without regard to consequences. Cemetaries are filled with them, as are wheel chairs, and broken hearts.

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