Comment from Mteske

Excellent

You did a great job using the acrostic poem format. You have great word choice- somnolent, despairing, glory etc. I really enjoyed this. However, there are few errors.

Errors- He fee- fie- foe- fumed.
Also, It left me wondering. Did jack climb down then lop it down?
Again, good job.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013

Thank you!

Steve

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

Jack and the beanstalk, indeed that's a very lovely fairy
tale, very nice in Acrostic stle, I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. lakeport.

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 Comment Written 26-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013

Thank you!

Steve

reply by lakeport on 29-Oct-2013

your welcome,Lakeport.

Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

A great Acrostic that tells the tale of
jack and his magic bean fiasco.
Your version is much more fun than the original,
with its clever rhyme and quick paced meter.
so enjoyable. Nancy

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 Comment Written 26-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013

Thanks, Nancy!

Steve