Comment from tbacha58

Excellent

Tha they...Will...NOT...SPEND...THE...REST...OF...THRIER...LIVES...
IN-TOMBED!!!

You are so wise, and so right, we all need to help each other, your poem is a powerful message to all . Penned from the heart. Bless u Terry

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013

Thanks and read my children story
"Barney VS. MagazonE!!"
Thanks..
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Comment from joneau2

Excellent

A very emotional appeal. I thoroughly endorse what you have written, and awarded five stars, although the work has many spag, as if written too quickly ... too fast in order to get the word out. Go bacl and do a bit of editing ... read it to someone. You'll see what i mean.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013

True but the content is more
important then the "Race!"
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Comment from winsome

Excellent

Your poem has me sitting here in tears. It touched my heart and my personal experiences. I don't think any one could have put it better.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013

True yes...
The best?
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Comment from RCamejo

Excellent

A different way of expressing the frustration of those that cannot understand people taking "the gift of life" with them.

I concur and was inspired by the words

Regards and well done

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2013

Thanks for that my "Aussie Friend!!"
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reply by RCamejo on 26-Oct-2013

My pleasure... we have the same issues here in Oz...incredible from a nation that considers itself to be clever.

Then again, eight weks ago we voted a government that believes the science on global warming is "crap" so.... maybe not so clever