God Creates Breasts' Beauty!
God Creates beauty of female breasts purposefully154 total reviews
Comment from Swampfox1
You write the truth about what God created and it is common knowledge the only problem is that not everyone sees it that way. What you write is in plain site but some see it other ways. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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You write the truth about what God created and it is common knowledge the only problem is that not everyone sees it that way. What you write is in plain site but some see it other ways. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this nice comment.
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you're welcome
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written non-fiction piece about the purpose and beauty of a woman's breasts. A very clever acrostic hidden in your paragraphs. It is the first time I got to read your work. I like your style and hope to read more of your unique work.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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A very well-written non-fiction piece about the purpose and beauty of a woman's breasts. A very clever acrostic hidden in your paragraphs. It is the first time I got to read your work. I like your style and hope to read more of your unique work.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this good feedback.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
It took me a while to determine the acrostic nature of the piece, but it is there. lol
I find mixing too much of the lyrical or poetic with the prose can lead to some uncomfortable reading at times, but this works fine here.
The phrasing takes a little getting used to and you rely on some adverbs when, perhaps, stronger verbs could be better applied.
Nice sentiments expressed throughout.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Hi there,
It took me a while to determine the acrostic nature of the piece, but it is there. lol
I find mixing too much of the lyrical or poetic with the prose can lead to some uncomfortable reading at times, but this works fine here.
The phrasing takes a little getting used to and you rely on some adverbs when, perhaps, stronger verbs could be better applied.
Nice sentiments expressed throughout.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 25-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thanks.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Breasts are so much more than the physical and practical uses, they are objects of desire and promote sexual intimacy. I enjoyed your tribute to them here, very sweet, love Dolly x
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Breasts are so much more than the physical and practical uses, they are objects of desire and promote sexual intimacy. I enjoyed your tribute to them here, very sweet, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this good comment.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I hadn't noticed the acrostic form to start off your paragraphs, but that was well done. Well written expression of the main purpose of breasts, to feed the young, either human or animal. A lovely picture you've used for your presentation.
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I hadn't noticed the acrostic form to start off your paragraphs, but that was well done. Well written expression of the main purpose of breasts, to feed the young, either human or animal. A lovely picture you've used for your presentation.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this good comment.
Comment from Cybertron1986
This is a very unique expression of creative thought with the use of a subject rarely chosen. I liked this very much. The acrostic flavour use of "GODS" was witty and it worked well to supplement the overall beauty of this poem. Very well done!
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This is a very unique expression of creative thought with the use of a subject rarely chosen. I liked this very much. The acrostic flavour use of "GODS" was witty and it worked well to supplement the overall beauty of this poem. Very well done!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this good review.
Comment from Tootie
Thank you for the notes that come with it. Yes, I see. This is very well written with a great message to share. God's design is perfect. Precious picture too.
Blessings, Cathy
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Thank you for the notes that come with it. Yes, I see. This is very well written with a great message to share. God's design is perfect. Precious picture too.
Blessings, Cathy
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this superb review I appreciate.
Comment from meeshu
well, I am finely getting a chance to read your writing, after all of these months. it is good, it is very much what I expected, very concise, each word carefully chosen with subliminal emphasis. a message of divine design, pragmatic and not preachy. natural selection is not ruled out, it is more or less ignored. the writer does not attempt to steer the reader to a specific conclusion, it is more of a nudge. I appreciate your brevity and your focus. a 6star as an introduction, ALCREATOR LITT DEAR, I would like to read more......................meeshu
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well, I am finely getting a chance to read your writing, after all of these months. it is good, it is very much what I expected, very concise, each word carefully chosen with subliminal emphasis. a message of divine design, pragmatic and not preachy. natural selection is not ruled out, it is more or less ignored. the writer does not attempt to steer the reader to a specific conclusion, it is more of a nudge. I appreciate your brevity and your focus. a 6star as an introduction, ALCREATOR LITT DEAR, I would like to read more......................meeshu
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
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Thank you for this superb, artistic review I do appreciate and thank you very much for the honour.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a nice little story you've penned. It's a wonderous and beautiful thing for us Humans and animals to feed their young. I did notice you acrostic you snuck in there:) May I make one tiny suggestion in the title, It just sounds a bit off, maybe put a dash after God's gifts, add the "S" and perhaps a & sign between the others, like such:
God's Gifts - Breasts & Beauty
It just sounds better. It's just a suggestion.
~Kerry
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This is a nice little story you've penned. It's a wonderous and beautiful thing for us Humans and animals to feed their young. I did notice you acrostic you snuck in there:) May I make one tiny suggestion in the title, It just sounds a bit off, maybe put a dash after God's gifts, add the "S" and perhaps a & sign between the others, like such:
God's Gifts - Breasts & Beauty
It just sounds better. It's just a suggestion.
~Kerry
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Alcreator: stars for the breasts and awareness of nursing precious
babies. I nursed both my daughters. They are smart and talented.
Yes, they didn't get sick. So many people get mad about exposing
the breasts. God keeps the milk flowing and babies love the sweet
Heaven's milk. It's perfect every time and always available. For the
Mom, it is a great bonding time. flylikeaneagle
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Alcreator: stars for the breasts and awareness of nursing precious
babies. I nursed both my daughters. They are smart and talented.
Yes, they didn't get sick. So many people get mad about exposing
the breasts. God keeps the milk flowing and babies love the sweet
Heaven's milk. It's perfect every time and always available. For the
Mom, it is a great bonding time. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 24-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this awesome review I do appreciate and thank you very much for the honour.
