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Comment from Ridley Williams
Hello Anupam,
I loved the evening mood you portrayed in this piece. Isn't it wonderful, when the sun goes down, we still have our sense of smell to appreciate the events unfolding all around. Well done, Bill
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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Hello Anupam,
I loved the evening mood you portrayed in this piece. Isn't it wonderful, when the sun goes down, we still have our sense of smell to appreciate the events unfolding all around. Well done, Bill
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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I am glad you liked it so much. I appreciate your comments. Thanks a lot for the lovely review:)
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written you paint such a beautiful picture using this form we enjoyed there is no need for art work regards Jill and Erick
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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Yes this is well written you paint such a beautiful picture using this form we enjoyed there is no need for art work regards Jill and Erick
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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I am glad you liked it so much. I appreciate your comments. Thanks a lot for the lovely review:)
Comment from allborn66
This piece is very beautiful. I love the word choice. I can smell the flowers. You communicated your theme well. The tone is delightful.
Barbara
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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This piece is very beautiful. I love the word choice. I can smell the flowers. You communicated your theme well. The tone is delightful.
Barbara
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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I am glad you liked it so much. I appreciate your comments. Thanks a lot for the lovely review:)
Comment from Sasha
This is a well written 5-7-5 poem and I love the choice of subject. You create a lovely image of rich lavender swaying in the breeze, filling the air with its perfume. The imagery you create with this one is lovely and no illustration is necessary.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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This is a well written 5-7-5 poem and I love the choice of subject. You create a lovely image of rich lavender swaying in the breeze, filling the air with its perfume. The imagery you create with this one is lovely and no illustration is necessary.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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I am glad you liked it so much. I appreciate your comments. Thanks a lot for the lovely review:)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made superb use of every syllable in this lovely, appealing 5-7-5 that shares with us the fragrance and beauty of lavender.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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You have made superb use of every syllable in this lovely, appealing 5-7-5 that shares with us the fragrance and beauty of lavender.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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I am glad you liked it so much. I appreciate your comments. Thanks a lot for the lovely review:)
Comment from elchupakabra
I enjoy this piece, I think the alliterations work well to add to the strength of the linework and the overall flow of the piece. The imagery is soft and alluring which lends nicely to the overall theme. Excellent work on this piece, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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I enjoy this piece, I think the alliterations work well to add to the strength of the linework and the overall flow of the piece. The imagery is soft and alluring which lends nicely to the overall theme. Excellent work on this piece, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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I am glad you liked it so much. I appreciate your comments. Thanks a lot for the lovely review:)
Comment from Sueellen11
Moonlit lavenders,, very nicely written,,, true to Japanese form and count for 5/7/5 haiku,, ,,I liked this one,,,well done,,,blessings,,sueellen
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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Moonlit lavenders,, very nicely written,,, true to Japanese form and count for 5/7/5 haiku,, ,,I liked this one,,,well done,,,blessings,,sueellen
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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I am glad you liked it so much. I appreciate your comments. Thanks a lot for the lovely review:)
Comment from Debra White
Hi Anupam :)
Another vivid picture arousing my sense of smell also. Really nicely written with lovely alliteration. Thanks for sharing and hope all is well with you :) Kindest regards as always, Debra :) x
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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Hi Anupam :)
Another vivid picture arousing my sense of smell also. Really nicely written with lovely alliteration. Thanks for sharing and hope all is well with you :) Kindest regards as always, Debra :) x
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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I am glad you liked it so much. I appreciate your comments. Thanks a lot for the lovely review:)
Comment from judiverse
Many of these contests call for no artwork. Sometimes I think that's a good idea, because voters can be swayed by artwork. Best of luck in the contest. Your syllable count is correct, and you create a visual mood with the color lavender and the motion of swaying in the breeze. Excellent alliteration with sway silently. judi
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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Many of these contests call for no artwork. Sometimes I think that's a good idea, because voters can be swayed by artwork. Best of luck in the contest. Your syllable count is correct, and you create a visual mood with the color lavender and the motion of swaying in the breeze. Excellent alliteration with sway silently. judi
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2013
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I am glad you liked it so much. I appreciate your comments. Thanks a lot for the lovely review:)
Comment from Cookie333
This reader had a lovely image of the lavender swaying in the breeze, while the wind released the scent of her oil.
Thank you for sharing this one
karen
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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This reader had a lovely image of the lavender swaying in the breeze, while the wind released the scent of her oil.
Thank you for sharing this one
karen
Comment Written 22-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you!
