Temptation - An Acrostic
Acrostic on Temptation writing prompt9 total reviews
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Will it's no sin to be tempted but yielding do it puts it in another category. This is well-written and pretty well describes temptation in this area. God loves you and so do I.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Will it's no sin to be tempted but yielding do it puts it in another category. This is well-written and pretty well describes temptation in this area. God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Thank you for a lovely review.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Well, dear poet, our protagonist here is most definitely...TEMPTED, that's for certain!
This was a great acrostic, full of seductive, sultry provocative poetic prose.
It should do very nicely in the contest.
Good luck!
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Well, dear poet, our protagonist here is most definitely...TEMPTED, that's for certain!
This was a great acrostic, full of seductive, sultry provocative poetic prose.
It should do very nicely in the contest.
Good luck!
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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I loved this review, Dean. Thanks!
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You are most welcome, it was fabulous!
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
An excellent 'Temptation' poem, mystery writer!
You have captured the essence of sexual temptation very well in your acrostic poem. Fave line ... "pleasure overrides decisions" ... how true!
Best wishes for the contest!
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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An excellent 'Temptation' poem, mystery writer!
You have captured the essence of sexual temptation very well in your acrostic poem. Fave line ... "pleasure overrides decisions" ... how true!
Best wishes for the contest!
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013
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Thanks, Connie.
Comment from Thatguypk
Hmm. Very good acrostic, and a deliciously naughty piece. You have certainly summed up carnal temptation beautifully. Should this be X-rated....lol. Very well done.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Hmm. Very good acrostic, and a deliciously naughty piece. You have certainly summed up carnal temptation beautifully. Should this be X-rated....lol. Very well done.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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I thought I kept it to at least PG-13 lol Thank you for a lovely review. :)
Comment from Nosha17
Very well-written and you have adhered to the confines of this poetic form very well. You have made good use of language, imagery and rhyming techniques. An enjoyable verse.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Very well-written and you have adhered to the confines of this poetic form very well. You have made good use of language, imagery and rhyming techniques. An enjoyable verse.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Thank you for a wonderful review, Nosha.
Comment from michaelcahill
Whoa. This is mad excellent. The acrostic not even noticed as the piece flowed forward beautifully. This meets the requirements and then some. A great piece of poetry. A well chosen artwork as well. Great work, mikey
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Whoa. This is mad excellent. The acrostic not even noticed as the piece flowed forward beautifully. This meets the requirements and then some. A great piece of poetry. A well chosen artwork as well. Great work, mikey
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Thank you for this very enthusiastic review, mikey. :)
Comment from mfowler
Your last T line is a killer. You get all hot and sweaty with 'evoking sensations in your glands' and round it it off so circumspectly in your final line. This is a good acrostic and a good entry.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Your last T line is a killer. You get all hot and sweaty with 'evoking sensations in your glands' and round it it off so circumspectly in your final line. This is a good acrostic and a good entry.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Thank you for a fantastic review, mfowler. :)
Comment from FrannyG
This is an excellent acrostic with every line delicately but suggestively developing the theme. It displays admirable finesse; good to see on a theme that might tempt lesser poets to go overboard. Really well done.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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This is an excellent acrostic with every line delicately but suggestively developing the theme. It displays admirable finesse; good to see on a theme that might tempt lesser poets to go overboard. Really well done.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Thank you for this most generous review. I appreciate the compliment.
Comment from tfawcus
I can't help feeling that I might know who the author of this one is! 'wanton whispers', 'melting ... inhibitions', 'carnal bliss,!'! Definitely, as you say, 'Not something I would choose to miss'. The moonlit lady under the tree is the perfect temptress.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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I can't help feeling that I might know who the author of this one is! 'wanton whispers', 'melting ... inhibitions', 'carnal bliss,!'! Definitely, as you say, 'Not something I would choose to miss'. The moonlit lady under the tree is the perfect temptress.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Thank you for a wonderful review, tfawcus.