If Some Could Tell!
If we were learned to tell! A Non-Fiction in 220 words112 total reviews
Comment from c_lucas
It is far easier to tell the true tale,than to ad-lib. It's hard to keep tracks of the non-truths. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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It is far easier to tell the true tale,than to ad-lib. It's hard to keep tracks of the non-truths. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
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Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Thank you very much.
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You're welcome.
Comment from adewpearl
Wise is known by his act - not correct English language syntax
A true wise tells - do you mean wise person, person of wisdom?
A true wise tells...that sentence needs lots of work
all those anybodies and anythings get confusing
An unwise tells - unwise man/person?
As always, I can tell you have something to say, Al, but it is virtually impossible to tell what that something is because of your problems writing a properly composed sentence. Brooke
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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Wise is known by his act - not correct English language syntax
A true wise tells - do you mean wise person, person of wisdom?
A true wise tells...that sentence needs lots of work
all those anybodies and anythings get confusing
An unwise tells - unwise man/person?
As always, I can tell you have something to say, Al, but it is virtually impossible to tell what that something is because of your problems writing a properly composed sentence. Brooke
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Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Thank you. I have changed words and edited it.
