If Some Could Tell!
If we were learned to tell! A Non-Fiction in 220 words112 total reviews
Comment from CR Delport
Not everyone can tell a story like is is suppose to be told, and some will do it merely to make themselves look good. Thank you for sharing and good luck.
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Not everyone can tell a story like is is suppose to be told, and some will do it merely to make themselves look good. Thank you for sharing and good luck.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
Comment from Rondeno
Some of us are hollow reeds and tinkling brass, making noise for the sake of the noise itself. You are right: we must seeks out those who have something to say.
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Some of us are hollow reeds and tinkling brass, making noise for the sake of the noise itself. You are right: we must seeks out those who have something to say.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
Comment from The Death
I liked how you have portrayed the difference between wise and unwise. The thoughts flow smoothly and phrasing is effective. Wise men know when is the right time to act or say something. We must realise this and self introspect
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I liked how you have portrayed the difference between wise and unwise. The thoughts flow smoothly and phrasing is effective. Wise men know when is the right time to act or say something. We must realise this and self introspect
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
Comment from nannabot
Hi, I liked this piece. Your words make a lot of sense. I know what you mean about "The right words, to right person, at right time." Words can be double edged; destructive and healing. Without wisdom words alone are no good, just lip service. Good luck with your work. LoL.nannabot. xxx
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Hi, I liked this piece. Your words make a lot of sense. I know what you mean about "The right words, to right person, at right time." Words can be double edged; destructive and healing. Without wisdom words alone are no good, just lip service. Good luck with your work. LoL.nannabot. xxx
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
Comment from Titanx9
This is an incredible poem, Acreator. A sagacious person will always choose his or words wisely, because once uttered, they can never be retracted. The old adage, "loose lips sink ships" may sound ludicrous, but it's true. Extraneous words for no other reason than their sound are always unwise and most of the time, not in good form. Great job with this one!
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This is an incredible poem, Acreator. A sagacious person will always choose his or words wisely, because once uttered, they can never be retracted. The old adage, "loose lips sink ships" may sound ludicrous, but it's true. Extraneous words for no other reason than their sound are always unwise and most of the time, not in good form. Great job with this one!
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
Comment from lindalcreel
So if everyone followed that philosophy we would live in a pretty quiet world. Most of what is said is distorted and the truth is in the words of the story teller. That's the great thing about writing; as long as we stay true to our self,then we have to be accountable for what we say, when we say it, and where we say it, but the how is left to the interpretation of the reader. Wonderful philosophy. Thanks for sharing.
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So if everyone followed that philosophy we would live in a pretty quiet world. Most of what is said is distorted and the truth is in the words of the story teller. That's the great thing about writing; as long as we stay true to our self,then we have to be accountable for what we say, when we say it, and where we say it, but the how is left to the interpretation of the reader. Wonderful philosophy. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
Comment from emjaihammond
You have expressed an important principal here. It is really quite important how we decide when, where and with whom we share our opinions or thoughts. I agree a wise man uses his words wisely. This is a very thoughtful piece with a subject we all should touch upon every now and then
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You have expressed an important principal here. It is really quite important how we decide when, where and with whom we share our opinions or thoughts. I agree a wise man uses his words wisely. This is a very thoughtful piece with a subject we all should touch upon every now and then
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
Comment from Dean Kuch
My dear Alcreator Litt Dear...
Let's start with why a person would be a "poop stirrer." You have described someone who appears to suffer from low self-esteem. The gossip or "poop stirrer" is usually one who feels, on some level, very powerless.
What can make a person powerful? When she (or he) has "information" which others may not have, that's what. If this person seems to always be in the know about things going on, there is a greater tendency for others to seek them out for the latest tidbit. This gives the "poop stirrer" the sense of power which they crave and need, but are unable to get in a legitimate manner.
In addition, you have described a person who hints or makes innuendoes, that suggests that they are not even confident enough to make a firm stance on the information being shared. This is also a method of baiting another person. If I toss the line out there with the bait on it and you nibble on it, I know that I have a potential "fish on the line." Also, if I'm real lucky, you will take the bait and run with it, and I will then have you "hooked". Either way, I am safe. If you choose not to nibble on the illusory tidbit, I have not exposed myself or my information to you.
You can effectively deal with people like the people you have described in only one way, and that is in a very direct manner. If you let them know that you are not interested in engaging in harmful conversations about other people, they should leave you alone. In addition, when they're talking with you in a vague manner, insist that they clarify what they are saying to you. For example... "I am unclear as to what you are saying, can you be more specific?" Or, "Tell me what you mean by that," or "You used the plural when you described that incident, how many times and when did they occur?" If you use this technique consistently, "Ms. or Mrs. Vagueness" will get the message clearly that you will not accept their statements as fact and at face value. This will discourage them from being vague, because they know that they will have to explain further. Please note: the most effective way to deal with this situation is to firmly, but politely, tell them that you do not want to hear gossip or harmful information.
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My dear Alcreator Litt Dear...
Let's start with why a person would be a "poop stirrer." You have described someone who appears to suffer from low self-esteem. The gossip or "poop stirrer" is usually one who feels, on some level, very powerless.
What can make a person powerful? When she (or he) has "information" which others may not have, that's what. If this person seems to always be in the know about things going on, there is a greater tendency for others to seek them out for the latest tidbit. This gives the "poop stirrer" the sense of power which they crave and need, but are unable to get in a legitimate manner.
In addition, you have described a person who hints or makes innuendoes, that suggests that they are not even confident enough to make a firm stance on the information being shared. This is also a method of baiting another person. If I toss the line out there with the bait on it and you nibble on it, I know that I have a potential "fish on the line." Also, if I'm real lucky, you will take the bait and run with it, and I will then have you "hooked". Either way, I am safe. If you choose not to nibble on the illusory tidbit, I have not exposed myself or my information to you.
You can effectively deal with people like the people you have described in only one way, and that is in a very direct manner. If you let them know that you are not interested in engaging in harmful conversations about other people, they should leave you alone. In addition, when they're talking with you in a vague manner, insist that they clarify what they are saying to you. For example... "I am unclear as to what you are saying, can you be more specific?" Or, "Tell me what you mean by that," or "You used the plural when you described that incident, how many times and when did they occur?" If you use this technique consistently, "Ms. or Mrs. Vagueness" will get the message clearly that you will not accept their statements as fact and at face value. This will discourage them from being vague, because they know that they will have to explain further. Please note: the most effective way to deal with this situation is to firmly, but politely, tell them that you do not want to hear gossip or harmful information.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2013
Comment from michaelcahill
The use of several synonyms is effective in clarifying in an exact way each point you wish to make. I like the style of doing that in a piece such as this. It removes even the slightest doubt as to your meaning. As it is important that the meaning is clear I find it to be a most effective method. I find your points to be quite well taken and difficult to dispute in any way. An excellent point that a wise person speaks when it is appropriate to do so. It is foolish indeed to pontificate to those that will not listen. Very well done piece. mike
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The use of several synonyms is effective in clarifying in an exact way each point you wish to make. I like the style of doing that in a piece such as this. It removes even the slightest doubt as to your meaning. As it is important that the meaning is clear I find it to be a most effective method. I find your points to be quite well taken and difficult to dispute in any way. An excellent point that a wise person speaks when it is appropriate to do so. It is foolish indeed to pontificate to those that will not listen. Very well done piece. mike
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
Comment from tbacha58
Oh my God, What an amazing intellectual poem you have created tonight. Enjoyed reading several times. Because its so deep, and only tells the truth. Great work done here. Terry
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Oh my God, What an amazing intellectual poem you have created tonight. Enjoyed reading several times. Because its so deep, and only tells the truth. Great work done here. Terry
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
