haiku (mountain blizzard)
haiku 4/7/526 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
art work showing is it not? the mountain winter brings tough times to all including the wolf and all of natures wildlife,bringing snow storms blowing through the mountain areas
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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art work showing is it not? the mountain winter brings tough times to all including the wolf and all of natures wildlife,bringing snow storms blowing through the mountain areas
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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I reposted it after the contest. Thank you for the review
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ok now worries
Comment from Thatguypk
A nice image has been painted here, in so few words. That is an achievement. Congratulations on winning the Contest. Well deserved, I'm sure. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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A nice image has been painted here, in so few words. That is an achievement. Congratulations on winning the Contest. Well deserved, I'm sure. Best wishes.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013
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Thank you
Comment from poesyapprentice
Yipeeeee! So happy to see you got a win for this! Congrats, my friend. You really know how to pack a punch with your mental pics : ) You can see it, hear it, and feel it! Ferocious! That fierce wolf isn't anything against the might of winter, poor thing. Sometimes even the strong get knocked to their knees. Sorry no sixers, but excellent job! : ) xxx
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Yipeeeee! So happy to see you got a win for this! Congrats, my friend. You really know how to pack a punch with your mental pics : ) You can see it, hear it, and feel it! Ferocious! That fierce wolf isn't anything against the might of winter, poor thing. Sometimes even the strong get knocked to their knees. Sorry no sixers, but excellent job! : ) xxx
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2013
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Thank you Marsha! Great review as always.
Comment from Sylvia Page
Hello Val
First of all congratulations on winning this contest with this awesome 5-7-5 poem. It is qite clear why this won the contest. The imagery is striking and real.
Sylvia
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Hello Val
First of all congratulations on winning this contest with this awesome 5-7-5 poem. It is qite clear why this won the contest. The imagery is striking and real.
Sylvia
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Thank for the review and congrats
Comment from teafor2
Val Crisson--Higher elevation storm observed in enjambment
of lines #1 and #2. Enlightenment provided for both pre-
vious lines by line #3. Winter phenomenon created hazardous
conditions for animal. Excellent snippet from nature.
Congrats on winning the competition. teafor2
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Val Crisson--Higher elevation storm observed in enjambment
of lines #1 and #2. Enlightenment provided for both pre-
vious lines by line #3. Winter phenomenon created hazardous
conditions for animal. Excellent snippet from nature.
Congrats on winning the competition. teafor2
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much. This is a great review
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You are welcome.
Comment from Cindy Warren
I'm not looking forward to those blizzards. You've described them perfectly. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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I'm not looking forward to those blizzards. You've described them perfectly. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Thank you
Comment from mfowler
This is lovely, evocative. You have created a wild word picture with a great contrast/rejoinder about the wolf. A lovely haiku. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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This is lovely, evocative. You have created a wild word picture with a great contrast/rejoinder about the wolf. A lovely haiku. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Thank you for getting the essence oh this haiku
Comment from mystery poet
This made me think of how often in winter
scene's, as a fan of cartoons, especially
Christmas one's, the winds not only blew
fiercely, but with a chilling whistle...
'No fart found here '.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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This made me think of how often in winter
scene's, as a fan of cartoons, especially
Christmas one's, the winds not only blew
fiercely, but with a chilling whistle...
'No fart found here '.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Thank you for this intelligent reviw and for "getting" it
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Well, then I get an A+. right?
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Absolutely! Lol
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LOL!
Comment from Dean Kuch
This is wonderful, what a chillingly frosty depiction of winters cruel chill.
Very nicely done, and I wish you all the best in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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This is wonderful, what a chillingly frosty depiction of winters cruel chill.
Very nicely done, and I wish you all the best in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the review and good wishes.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Charlene0513
No room for error when the wildlife know that there is a big snowstorm a brewing.
But thank goodness their senses tell them to be aware of trouble.
Charlene
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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No room for error when the wildlife know that there is a big snowstorm a brewing.
But thank goodness their senses tell them to be aware of trouble.
Charlene
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Absolutely , thank you for the review
