Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Painting watercolours"Words to pass on to my children
6 total reviews
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Autumn is definitely a time when it looks like God sets up all night painting all the beautiful colors on the trees for us to see. Good job. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Autumn is definitely a time when it looks like God sets up all night painting all the beautiful colors on the trees for us to see. Good job. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thanks Evelyn for this great review. I appreciate it. Mary
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. It adds romance to the season. I love to bring the pictures of the seasons into my home. I have visions of the other seasons when the current season lasts too long,. Each painter adds his or her own touch to the work and the season. Great work.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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I love the picture. It adds romance to the season. I love to bring the pictures of the seasons into my home. I have visions of the other seasons when the current season lasts too long,. Each painter adds his or her own touch to the work and the season. Great work.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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A lovely review i am grateful for, I thanks you for your comments and rating. Mary
Comment from mumsyone
I love painting my watercolors
Mixing the paint gives me a thrill
Colors blending in to one
Each season excites me
Autumn I like best
Nature inspires
Never fails
To awe
Me
A well-written nonet and a good entry for the contest. Beautiful presentation, too.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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I love painting my watercolors
Mixing the paint gives me a thrill
Colors blending in to one
Each season excites me
Autumn I like best
Nature inspires
Never fails
To awe
Me
A well-written nonet and a good entry for the contest. Beautiful presentation, too.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thank you mumsyone for the great review. Mary
Comment from christopherjl
Nice enjambment at the end. I struggled with the beginning a bit because it felt more like telling than it did showing but I think that's just my preference for the writing, not something that necessarily requires improvement.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Nice enjambment at the end. I struggled with the beginning a bit because it felt more like telling than it did showing but I think that's just my preference for the writing, not something that necessarily requires improvement.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thanks for your comments and the detailed review I appreciate it Mary
Comment from Sueellen11
Nicely written nonet,,, lovely picture to match your words,,, is inspires 3 syllable?,,,,, good entry,,, good luck,,,blessings,,,sueellen
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Nicely written nonet,,, lovely picture to match your words,,, is inspires 3 syllable?,,,,, good entry,,, good luck,,,blessings,,,sueellen
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Hi sueellen , i dou ble checked the word inspires and it is 2 syllables,, thanks for the great review and comments.
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Hi sueellen , i dou ble checked the word inspires and it is 2 syllables,, thanks for the great review and comments.
Comment from tfawcus
The painting is just beautiful! Such an assured sense of colour. Just the first hints of autumn in the greens and the sky beyond still blue but without the heat of summer. The thrill of mixing the paints to capture the inspiration of this mellow season is so evident in your poem. I am in awe for whenever I have tried it I seem to end up with a muddy winter brown or worse! Applying the background colourwash is calming but everything after that... perhaps I should not go on! Of course I wish you luck in the contest and if it is judged as a whole, the effect of the composition as well as the words being taken into account, you should do well!
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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The painting is just beautiful! Such an assured sense of colour. Just the first hints of autumn in the greens and the sky beyond still blue but without the heat of summer. The thrill of mixing the paints to capture the inspiration of this mellow season is so evident in your poem. I am in awe for whenever I have tried it I seem to end up with a muddy winter brown or worse! Applying the background colourwash is calming but everything after that... perhaps I should not go on! Of course I wish you luck in the contest and if it is judged as a whole, the effect of the composition as well as the words being taken into account, you should do well!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thank you for the great review, I really appreciate all your comments and well wishes, and the compliment on my painting.