Nature's Poetic Voice.
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Rainforest Magic"A sensory appreciation of nature.
14 total reviews
Comment from Author Unknown
The photo makes me want to go there Seken. HOW lucky you are! Wow, and I loved the flow and rhyme to your poem! The one phrase that threw me was the last three words tho. I've never heard that before? But folks talk differently in other countries. Interesting. Craven...I'll google it. VERY nice work. :) A.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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The photo makes me want to go there Seken. HOW lucky you are! Wow, and I loved the flow and rhyme to your poem! The one phrase that threw me was the last three words tho. I've never heard that before? But folks talk differently in other countries. Interesting. Craven...I'll google it. VERY nice work. :) A.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2013
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Thanks for stopping by to review and comment.
I appreciate your generous review and support.
Craven means cowardly, faint-hearted or spiritless.
The beauty there just raises your mood and the atmosphere
is so relaxing.
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Ah! Okay...Now I'll read it again with a fresh knowledge. Thanks!
Comment from Sankey
Very nice friend. Good work lovely thoughts coming through. I also liked the photo. I need to get on and do some more poetry myself. Thanks very much for the inspiration.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2013
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Very nice friend. Good work lovely thoughts coming through. I also liked the photo. I need to get on and do some more poetry myself. Thanks very much for the inspiration.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2013
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Thank you for reading and reviewing.
I appreciate your generous review.
Comment from Nichola
Isn't it nice to be able to write without distractions? The place you described in your poem seems the perfect peaceful place to write poetry! You have nice word choices with haven and craven, ponder and wonder, sprinkles and tinkles, description and depiction. The meter is lovely. Nichola
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2013
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Isn't it nice to be able to write without distractions? The place you described in your poem seems the perfect peaceful place to write poetry! You have nice word choices with haven and craven, ponder and wonder, sprinkles and tinkles, description and depiction. The meter is lovely. Nichola
Comment Written 03-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2013
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Thank you.
I appreciate your review and comments.
This truly is a lovely peaceful place.
Comment from Jade Lawson
Beautiful poem with a great imagery. Loved the surroundings and how beautifully you described them... the forest, animals, the nature. One can feel the magic of such place and how it soothes the soul. Great job.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Beautiful poem with a great imagery. Loved the surroundings and how beautifully you described them... the forest, animals, the nature. One can feel the magic of such place and how it soothes the soul. Great job.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
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Thank you.
I appreciate your lovely review.
Thanks for your time.
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welcome x
Comment from 9999pool
Solitude is different from loneliness and quietness. It is a revelation for us who can find such solitude sipping coffee in a rain forest heritage.
Nature floats by and the sounds of joy all around us and we suddenly realized life can be so beautiful and peaceful - away from the crowds.
Our hearts and minds filled with such pleasure that we will not be craven anymore.
Excellent write and well penned.
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Solitude is different from loneliness and quietness. It is a revelation for us who can find such solitude sipping coffee in a rain forest heritage.
Nature floats by and the sounds of joy all around us and we suddenly realized life can be so beautiful and peaceful - away from the crowds.
Our hearts and minds filled with such pleasure that we will not be craven anymore.
Excellent write and well penned.
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thanks for a lovely rview.
I appreciate your time and support.
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Welcome dear.
I am behind at the moment on reviews and will do more as I can see there is one which was a six star write in your profile, smiles.
Have a great day and a wonderful morning with your favorite cuppa.
Maybe grow a few saplings around you house to get that rain forest feeling again at home?
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie. :))
Comment from Selina Stambi
Then, as I depart this forest haven,
I no longer hold thoughts that are craven ... LOVE these lines - I know exactly what you mean. I think we writers all have to run away from the press of the world from time to time to re-charge, don't we?
I would have never thought of putting it that way, but 'craven' is the perfect word to express the feeling!
I love the gentle, soothing feel of the nature around you - so very beautifully described.
xxx
Sonali :)
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Then, as I depart this forest haven,
I no longer hold thoughts that are craven ... LOVE these lines - I know exactly what you mean. I think we writers all have to run away from the press of the world from time to time to re-charge, don't we?
I would have never thought of putting it that way, but 'craven' is the perfect word to express the feeling!
I love the gentle, soothing feel of the nature around you - so very beautifully described.
xxx
Sonali :)
Comment Written 14-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Thanks so much for a generous review.
I appreciate your time and supportive comments.
Comment from Cookie333
What a lovely place this must be to have inspired this piece my friend. You must have seen plants and trees I can only dream of...
thank you
karen
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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What a lovely place this must be to have inspired this piece my friend. You must have seen plants and trees I can only dream of...
thank you
karen
Comment Written 14-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Thank you Karen for a generous review.
It is in a World Heritage rainforest and the little cafe is right beside the babbling brook and the birds call constantly
as they flit among the trees.Their colours are amazing and it's like a little piece of Heaven dropped right there.
I wrote this poem as I was waiting for the others in my writer's group to arrive.
I'm so glad you liked it.
Comment from adewpearl
I like your photo as well as your poem :-)
solid rhyming couplets
natures' depiction - nature's
nice touches of alliteration like in rain on the rooftop
lovely detail of setting that creates mood well
Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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I like your photo as well as your poem :-)
solid rhyming couplets
natures' depiction - nature's
nice touches of alliteration like in rain on the rooftop
lovely detail of setting that creates mood well
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 14-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013
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Thank you.
I appreciate your time and detailed comments.
Thanks for the comma correction.
Comment from Treischel
The beauty of nature can really do that to you. A serenade in the depths of the rainforest by nature's symphony creates peace and clear thinking.
A lovely set of aabb rhymed quatrains in pentameter.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2013
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The beauty of nature can really do that to you. A serenade in the depths of the rainforest by nature's symphony creates peace and clear thinking.
A lovely set of aabb rhymed quatrains in pentameter.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2013
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Thank you.
I appreciate your generous review and support.
Comment from tbacha58
It's been a blessing to sit and ponder,
In this magical place full of wonder,
Then, as I depart this forest haven,
I no longer hold thoughts that are craven
Its so nice of you to think of us at such a beautiful time, that means you are happy to share your feelings with us. I enjoyed also reading your poem, seeing the picture, and writing to you , a hello. Hugs Terry
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2013
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It's been a blessing to sit and ponder,
In this magical place full of wonder,
Then, as I depart this forest haven,
I no longer hold thoughts that are craven
Its so nice of you to think of us at such a beautiful time, that means you are happy to share your feelings with us. I enjoyed also reading your poem, seeing the picture, and writing to you , a hello. Hugs Terry
Comment Written 12-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2013
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Thank you for a generous eview.
I appreciate your time and comments.
Writing in this pristine place was so easy.