Never say never
Encouraging one to have a go.8 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
I enjoyed reading this short piece. You've said a lot in your 5-7-5. I always favor uplifting, positive messages in poetry. Have you written anything lately? You are a member about the same length of time as I have been. Marilyn
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2016
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I enjoyed reading this short piece. You've said a lot in your 5-7-5. I always favor uplifting, positive messages in poetry. Have you written anything lately? You are a member about the same length of time as I have been. Marilyn
Comment Written 25-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2016
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I write regularly, and have set up s face book page to share my poetry with others. Sorry haven't been on FanStory for a while.
Comment from Janet7053
Churchhill and you have something in common. He said, "Never give up, I say, NEVER give up!" Every day is a brand new canvas, never been lived. Go out and make it your masterpiece. I heard these words on the radio. A local DJ says that every morning.
5-7-5 simple, yet commands a response. Very good!
reply by the author on 12-May-2015
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Churchhill and you have something in common. He said, "Never give up, I say, NEVER give up!" Every day is a brand new canvas, never been lived. Go out and make it your masterpiece. I heard these words on the radio. A local DJ says that every morning.
5-7-5 simple, yet commands a response. Very good!
Comment Written 05-May-2015
reply by the author on 12-May-2015
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Thank you, I believe in the old saying if at first you don't succeed try again. It is something I think we all need to remember.
Comment from lakeport
Never say never, indeed your dream might come true,that's very wise expressed 5/7/5 poem, good luck at the contest.
God bless you.lakeport.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014
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Never say never, indeed your dream might come true,that's very wise expressed 5/7/5 poem, good luck at the contest.
God bless you.lakeport.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014
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thank you.
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your welcome.lakeport.
Comment from Bill Schott
This five - seven - five does a good job of reminding the reader that there always a way, always something different to try, and always room for optimism.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014
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This five - seven - five does a good job of reminding the reader that there always a way, always something different to try, and always room for optimism.
Comment Written 16-May-2014
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014
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thank you
Comment from katkins98
This is truly amazing. It is so powerful and has clear message. I love the repetition in the first line and the way that last two lines rhyme. I love it.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2013
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This is truly amazing. It is so powerful and has clear message. I love the repetition in the first line and the way that last two lines rhyme. I love it.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2013
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Thank you, I love to write poetry and I enjoy knowing that it touches others
Comment from Jean Lutz
Clicked on your profile to see if you are from Louisiana. Far, far from here, but your writing blessed me anyway. Welcome to FanStory.com. I agree completely with what you have to say.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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Clicked on your profile to see if you are from Louisiana. Far, far from here, but your writing blessed me anyway. Welcome to FanStory.com. I agree completely with what you have to say.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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Thank you, I am just ever so slightly far far from louisiana LOL
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Thank you, I am just ever so slightly far far from louisiana LOL
Comment from michaelcahill
this piece is full met to the requirements of the challenge. A positive and uplifting message. In this form it is very striking. The essence so much stronger than a long diatribe on positive thinking and the like. This is the message pure and simple and clearly stated. really quite beautifully done. good job. strong contender. mike
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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this piece is full met to the requirements of the challenge. A positive and uplifting message. In this form it is very striking. The essence so much stronger than a long diatribe on positive thinking and the like. This is the message pure and simple and clearly stated. really quite beautifully done. good job. strong contender. mike
Comment Written 12-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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Thank you, that is really encouraging as I have never done this sort of thing before.
Comment from Cajungirl
You are correct, Dreams should always be followed
Never say never, excellent 5/7/5. You got the right amount of syllables and lines. This is an excellent contest entry and I wish you the best of luck.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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You are correct, Dreams should always be followed
Never say never, excellent 5/7/5. You got the right amount of syllables and lines. This is an excellent contest entry and I wish you the best of luck.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2013
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Thank you for you comments, really encouraging
