Comment from sunao

Excellent

Thank you so much for writing this. I enjoyed reading this. You have a style of writing that is unique and original. I hope that my poems are as original as yours. Please keep up with the good work and have a magnificent day!

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2017

Aw thanks Sis Hope you heard the good old tune. Very well known I believe. I just got my new Rant poem up if interested. Night Night.

reply by sunao on 19-Jun-2017

Your welcome, yes, I heard the tune and it was wonderful! Have a great week.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Sankey, this made me laugh out loud and it's so true, probably everywhere in the world. Spot on. You're touching a sore point with so many. Very well written. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017

Thanks Ulla, I have a bit of a Rant or Rave poem coming as some don't have a clue about reviews and scoring etc. Thanks again.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You made me laugh! And your write is so poignant and true! Love the accompanying artwork too, and thanks for reminding me of the tune! Have a great day, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2017

Thanks Dolly, glad you heard trhe old tune I converted that from Midi and it sounds much better as an MP3. Much appreciate your great review.

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

We could certainly sing this here too, ha ha. Guess it's a global song, because I don't think the bureaucrats are much use anywhere, ha ha. Very clever, blessings....

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2017

SO true mate, Thanks for the lovely review. Many are saying the same thing about it being a Global problem beaurocracy I mean hehe.

Comment from marybell1

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem "Government Grief" as I sung alone with the tune. Your rhyming was spot on.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017

Thanks Marybell, have we met before? Your name looks kinda familiar but I am not sure I have fanned ya yet. Will certainly look for your stuff as I believe strongly in reciprocation with other FS Members' stuff. I nearly pulled the plug on this place but my name ran out before I was ready to leave so signed up for another 2 years cos not much more than 1. Cheers.

reply by marybell1 on 13-Jun-2017

I do not remember you. I have only been a member since Jan. this year.
Marybell1.

reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017

OK No worries I promise I will check your stuff. I recently completed a Revive Certificate review of my biography for the chapters I could.

Comment from MelB

Excellent

Hi Geoff, so far behind on my reviews. I feel like I'll never catch up. I enjoyed reading. The government and pooh do go together like a hand and a glove. I'm not a huge fan of the corruption and lies.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017

Yeah well Sis another thing America and Australia have in common. Poohey Governments. Hope you liked the old tune. I was think of adding harmony but it kind of goes ok on its own. Too hard for the other.

reply by MelB on 13-Jun-2017

I was hoping yours wasn't like that. Corruption seems to run with the word politics.

reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017

Yeah well figure it out, when you have a former Journo as your country's leader of a supposedly Conservative Govt...ie we all know Journo's are decidedly LEFT in their views...meaning opposite to conservative!

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Snazzy little tune. I was thinking about how now brown cow. The poor old ship has lost its rudder,
The system is bursting like old Bessie's udder 
'N we'll all be better off when the Bureaucrats get the boot.
LOL.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017

Did that FS error come in on your review or was it on mine? Thanks for the review mate.

Comment from lalajovanoski

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading this poem I found it to be very informational it has a great structure throughout and an ice flow thank you very much for sharing this God bless

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017

Thanks new friend pretty sure we have met before. Hope you liked my arrangement of 'When Johnny Come Marching Home!"

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I like this witty little ditty Geoff, it fits the tune of "When Johnny comes marching home" perfectly" I suppose if there's one department we all hate the most it's going to be the tax department? They tell me it's the one that is reasonably efficient. Well done, Bro, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017

Thanks Bro Glad you liked it. I struggled to get the metre right with my arrangement and I did intend to add harmony but I decided the melody sounds good enough on its own.

reply by royowen on 12-Jun-2017

Well done Geoff

Comment from apky

Excellent

I liked the music and wondered if it was you playing my friend.

>>'N we'll all be better off when the Bureaucrats get the boot.<< made me really laugh hard. That book of yours must be hilarious, I imagine.

Thanks for posting it.

Apky

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017

Well mate I hope you will have a look at "The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go" Subtitled "GOD NEVER LETS GO!" My autobiography. Sorry no rewards left pretty well.

reply by the author on 12-Jun-2017

Well mate I hope you will have a look at "The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go" Subtitled "GOD NEVER LETS GO!" My autobiography. Sorry no rewards left pretty well.