Wish upon a star.
Poem about wishing upon a star7 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
solid rhyming
good alliteration in fame and fortune
and in dear departed
What a moving, poignant wish :-) A beautiful poem of love and loss and longing. Brooke
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2013
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solid rhyming
good alliteration in fame and fortune
and in dear departed
What a moving, poignant wish :-) A beautiful poem of love and loss and longing. Brooke
Comment Written 07-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2013
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Thanks for great review. zanya
Comment from Jackarrie
This is very well written poem about wishing on a star for the company of your departed Husband. Very sad story in a poem.
To savour again the depths of our
love and compatability (compatibility)
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2013
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This is very well written poem about wishing on a star for the company of your departed Husband. Very sad story in a poem.
To savour again the depths of our
love and compatability (compatibility)
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2013
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Thank you for this meaningful review. zanya
Comment from Black_Oxygen
This is beautiful Love Poetry. The emotions are powerful
and the sentiments are sincere. The reader-friendly
language makes it easy to comprehend. Thank You for your
creation.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2013
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This is beautiful Love Poetry. The emotions are powerful
and the sentiments are sincere. The reader-friendly
language makes it easy to comprehend. Thank You for your
creation.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2013
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Thank you for this great review.zanya
Comment from mfowler
Your final wish is quite beautiful and personal. It caught me by surprise as I wandered along enjoying the cadence of your lovely verses and recognising the contrast of choices listed. It's a poem of two aspects, quite engaging. Good luck in the prompt vote.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2013
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Your final wish is quite beautiful and personal. It caught me by surprise as I wandered along enjoying the cadence of your lovely verses and recognising the contrast of choices listed. It's a poem of two aspects, quite engaging. Good luck in the prompt vote.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2013
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I am delighted with this review. zanya
Comment from w.j.debi
Your verse starts out a bit wistful, wishing to travel through time historical and futuristic, and then you change gears and state your true wish and tug at the heart. Nice little unexpected twist. Great job with the prompt. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2013
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Your verse starts out a bit wistful, wishing to travel through time historical and futuristic, and then you change gears and state your true wish and tug at the heart. Nice little unexpected twist. Great job with the prompt. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2013
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Thanks for this wonderful review. zanya
Comment from AnnieDawn
This little piece was well done in the use of the theme being carried out through the entire poem to the end.I think it would have worked better for this one to collect your sentences into groups of two or four and it wouldn't seem so strung out. You did an excellent job of getting your message across. Tweak this a bit. You can edit and I do with mine when I get constructive criticism. You have the talent. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2013
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This little piece was well done in the use of the theme being carried out through the entire poem to the end.I think it would have worked better for this one to collect your sentences into groups of two or four and it wouldn't seem so strung out. You did an excellent job of getting your message across. Tweak this a bit. You can edit and I do with mine when I get constructive criticism. You have the talent. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2013
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Delighted with this review and especially the good advice. zanya
Comment from Charlene0513
This is certainly romantic and sentimental poem addressing the memorable and wonderful times you shared with your soul-mate.
Very good flow and thoughtful meaning.
Charlene
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2013
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This is certainly romantic and sentimental poem addressing the memorable and wonderful times you shared with your soul-mate.
Very good flow and thoughtful meaning.
Charlene
Comment Written 05-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2013
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I am delighted with this review.zanya