~ My Sweet Baby Sophia RoseLyn ~
Dedicated to my grand baby... RIP Sophia. *PLEASE SEE NOTES*15 total reviews
Comment from pafaust
I'm so sorry for your loss. I can't imagine how hard this was to read after losing her. I'm sure that you treasured the precious time that you had with her and neither you nor your daughter will forget that. Sophia is your own special angel and she's thriving, now.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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I'm so sorry for your loss. I can't imagine how hard this was to read after losing her. I'm sure that you treasured the precious time that you had with her and neither you nor your daughter will forget that. Sophia is your own special angel and she's thriving, now.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Thank you for the beautiful, caring message!! It means a lot....xoxo
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Thank you for the beautiful, caring message!! It means a lot....xoxo
Comment from onebrit
What a Tradgedy for your family, how devastating for anyone to lose a child. I cannot even begin to imagine the pain you must be feeling. In the poem one feels how excited you and your daughter are to welcome your grandchild. How sad for you both.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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What a Tradgedy for your family, how devastating for anyone to lose a child. I cannot even begin to imagine the pain you must be feeling. In the poem one feels how excited you and your daughter are to welcome your grandchild. How sad for you both.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Thank you for the wonderful and kind comment and rating. Throughout the pain and grief hearing words from friends help a lot!! xoxo I am still sooo proud of Sophia too
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Thank you for the wonderful and kind comment and rating. Throughout the pain and grief hearing words from friends help a lot!! xoxo I am still sooo proud of Sophia too
Comment from tfawcus
The absolute joy of your poem celebrating the forthcoming birth of your grand-daughter is in stark contrast to the tragedy about which you write in your author's note. The combination is hugely powerful in its sadness. There is deeply moving poem waiting to be written contrasting the joy with the sadness.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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The absolute joy of your poem celebrating the forthcoming birth of your grand-daughter is in stark contrast to the tragedy about which you write in your author's note. The combination is hugely powerful in its sadness. There is deeply moving poem waiting to be written contrasting the joy with the sadness.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Thank you for the nice comment and rating....xoxo
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Thank you for the nice comment and rating....xoxo
Comment from ProSongwriter
So very sorry to hear about the loss of your grandchild. My wife and I have each lost a son (from previous marriages). However they were much older than pretty little Sophie ... my son was 22 and my wife's son was 33. Both died in vehicle accidents. Thus, I can relate to this in a similar manner.
You've touched my heart with this sad but wonderful poem. It must have been very difficult for you to write. It was wonderful! Thank you for sharing such a personal story with uis. God Bless,
Alan
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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So very sorry to hear about the loss of your grandchild. My wife and I have each lost a son (from previous marriages). However they were much older than pretty little Sophie ... my son was 22 and my wife's son was 33. Both died in vehicle accidents. Thus, I can relate to this in a similar manner.
You've touched my heart with this sad but wonderful poem. It must have been very difficult for you to write. It was wonderful! Thank you for sharing such a personal story with uis. God Bless,
Alan
Comment Written 16-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Thank you for the wonderfully touching comment and great review. I am so sorry to hear about your wife and your losses as well. Such a tragedy!! My sweet Sophia was 100% misdiagnosed by the top Pediatric Cardiologist at The Children's Hospital. He actually saw the problem as he stated in the file but for whatever reason he chose to not tell us and ignore it. This was very treatable and would let her live a long and healthy life. Instead he changed our lives forever. I really appreciate you taking the time to read her poem (there's more on my page lol) May God bless you and your family....
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What a tragedy! It's heartbreaking. Time heals the wound but sometimes the scars remain. My wife and I wish the very best for your family. We'll add you to our prayers tonight. Wishing you well, GBY,
Alan & Di
Comment from lalajovanoski
Extremely well written piece. I was able to easily relate to the message the author is executing. I really enjoyed reading it. Very relatable. Well done! Beautiful artwork.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Extremely well written piece. I was able to easily relate to the message the author is executing. I really enjoyed reading it. Very relatable. Well done! Beautiful artwork.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Thank you...may I ask why only the 4 stars? That really hurt my rating and if you liked it then I'm confused?!
Comment from Smoothiecool
What a beautiful tribute to a precious little girl, full of all the love a grandparent feels. You have lots of images showing throughout this poem. One suggestion in the last stanza take out "and in line one replace with comma to may the poem stronger. Beautifully written
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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What a beautiful tribute to a precious little girl, full of all the love a grandparent feels. You have lots of images showing throughout this poem. One suggestion in the last stanza take out "and in line one replace with comma to may the poem stronger. Beautifully written
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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Thank you so very much.....I truly appreciate it....xoxo
Comment from handmadecards
There are no words to say or tell that will ease your broken heart. But know that you have unseen support from every creative soul. Lovely piece of writing Oma. I grew up in an afrikaans speaking home, we also used Oma, but spelt it Ouma.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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There are no words to say or tell that will ease your broken heart. But know that you have unseen support from every creative soul. Lovely piece of writing Oma. I grew up in an afrikaans speaking home, we also used Oma, but spelt it Ouma.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2013
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Thank you so much!! My children picked the name "Oma" special for me as it's meaning is obviously grandma in German. I was honored. I appreciate your kind words..xoxo
Comment from adewpearl
What a precious photo of a precious little girl
I am so very sorry for your loss
My grandson Sawyer is almost 18 months old, but when my daughter was in her 29th week, Sawyer's twin died of a syndrome that involved, among other things, four separate heart defects.
My heart goes out to you because I know how hard it was to lose our precious little one.
solid rhyming couplets
every line so filled with love :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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What a precious photo of a precious little girl
I am so very sorry for your loss
My grandson Sawyer is almost 18 months old, but when my daughter was in her 29th week, Sawyer's twin died of a syndrome that involved, among other things, four separate heart defects.
My heart goes out to you because I know how hard it was to lose our precious little one.
solid rhyming couplets
every line so filled with love :-) Brooke
Comment Written 02-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2013
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Thank you so very much. Indeed the hardest thing Ive EVER had to deal with. She passed away right here at home and I even did CPR on he until help arrived. Very sad an I miss her sooo much. :(
Comment from irishauthorme
Can't really comment on your words, because this loss is so great. No way to reason it out, here you just have to go by faith, and the belief that we will all be rejoined again after we leave this earth. Hit home because I have a new granddaughter just three months old. I sincerely hope that you found some solace by putting your grief into words. Comments by that one guy shows how many FS'ers just skim through our works and do not really read.
My condolences to you, I admire your courage.
irish
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2013
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Can't really comment on your words, because this loss is so great. No way to reason it out, here you just have to go by faith, and the belief that we will all be rejoined again after we leave this earth. Hit home because I have a new granddaughter just three months old. I sincerely hope that you found some solace by putting your grief into words. Comments by that one guy shows how many FS'ers just skim through our works and do not really read.
My condolences to you, I admire your courage.
irish
Comment Written 29-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2013
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Thank you sooo much for your condolences to my family. It means a great deal to us. My grandaughter was only 24 days old when she passed from a misdiagnosed heart condition. It devestates our souls.
BTW....CONGRADULATIONS on your new grandbaby.
Comment from denhagan
This is a really nice poem, written in the quatrain style with good rhythm and rhyming throughout the poem, about the author's granddaughter. Sorry to hear about what happened to her.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2013
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This is a really nice poem, written in the quatrain style with good rhythm and rhyming throughout the poem, about the author's granddaughter. Sorry to hear about what happened to her.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2013
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Thank you very much....xoxo
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You're welcome,
Dennis
