Nature's Poetic Voice.
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Stars. A Diatelle Poem."A sensory appreciation of nature.
10 total reviews
Comment from Jade Lawson
Great picture to enhance the beauty of this poem. Great imagery, exploring the beauty of the night and the universe and what is part of it like the sky, moon and stars.
Good structure too.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2013
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Great picture to enhance the beauty of this poem. Great imagery, exploring the beauty of the night and the universe and what is part of it like the sky, moon and stars.
Good structure too.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2013
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Thank you.
I appreciate yout time and generous review.
Comment from 9999pool
The beautiful night skies with the trillions of stars and a shy moon have greeted us many times in our lifetimes. Each wonderful starry night will bright joy even for a short moment in time. As lovers enjoy the coolness of the night, the lonely ones can also feel please with what we see in the skies. Yes, the sight is so right and make it tonight for our dreams to come true too. Smiles.
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie. :))
Great Diatelle poem with the shape of a creative star too.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2013
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The beautiful night skies with the trillions of stars and a shy moon have greeted us many times in our lifetimes. Each wonderful starry night will bright joy even for a short moment in time. As lovers enjoy the coolness of the night, the lonely ones can also feel please with what we see in the skies. Yes, the sight is so right and make it tonight for our dreams to come true too. Smiles.
Cheerio, hugs, Ritchie. :))
Great Diatelle poem with the shape of a creative star too.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your kind words and generous review.
I appreciate it.
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My pleasure as always.
have a great day ahead and make every minute count and we ain't getting more than 24 hours a day. Just a thought, smiles.
Excellent write and well penned. Well done.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))
Comment from adewpearl
Lovely presentation of your poem, which is in good syllable count for the diatelle
excellent rhyming throughout
You create a beautiful scene
good personification of the shy moon
Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2013
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Lovely presentation of your poem, which is in good syllable count for the diatelle
excellent rhyming throughout
You create a beautiful scene
good personification of the shy moon
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 27-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2013
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Thanks, Brooke.
I really appreciate your detailed feedback.
Comment from krys123
Thank you for sharing this poem seken58 with your fans, myself another readers/writers. I enjoyed reading this particular poem very much about the 'Stars'. The rhyming scheme was done very well and neither was forced, strained or labored. Your particular format was also done very well penned it accomplished what it was set out to do. The imagery was fantastic it is really served its purpose and illuminating the visions in my particular mind helping met helping me see, through the words, the beauty of the stars. You have a good one in God bless.
AK
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Thank you for sharing this poem seken58 with your fans, myself another readers/writers. I enjoyed reading this particular poem very much about the 'Stars'. The rhyming scheme was done very well and neither was forced, strained or labored. Your particular format was also done very well penned it accomplished what it was set out to do. The imagery was fantastic it is really served its purpose and illuminating the visions in my particular mind helping met helping me see, through the words, the beauty of the stars. You have a good one in God bless.
AK
Comment Written 25-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Thank you for an exceptionally generous review.
I really appreciate the six stars and your comments.
Comment from Treischel
Oh! This is exquisite. I wish I had a six to give you on this one. It is both visually beautiful in picture and verse, as well as alive with rhyme and alliteration. Stunning!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Oh! This is exquisite. I wish I had a six to give you on this one. It is both visually beautiful in picture and verse, as well as alive with rhyme and alliteration. Stunning!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Thank you.
I am glad that you enjoyed it.
Your virtual six stars is most appreciated.
Comment from JM daSilva
And we are made of the substance of dead stars, which is interesting. We are the children of the stars and now we observe them. The lion king was not wrong when he said the old kings were the stars.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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And we are made of the substance of dead stars, which is interesting. We are the children of the stars and now we observe them. The lion king was not wrong when he said the old kings were the stars.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Thank you for a generous review and informative comments.
I appreciate your time.
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Welcome.
Comment from Jean Lutz
And you brought order with your words as you proclaim the work of the Creator. Nothing like the crispness of an Autumn evening to view the celestial display. Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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And you brought order with your words as you proclaim the work of the Creator. Nothing like the crispness of an Autumn evening to view the celestial display. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Thank you for reading and reviewing.
I appreciate your time.
Comment from Sankey
Great work good writing. Thanks for an excellent poem. Hope you win.
I like the picture with your poem as well.
Hope you can check out my book, some more as you have time. Thank you for a review you did today.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Great work good writing. Thanks for an excellent poem. Hope you win.
I like the picture with your poem as well.
Hope you can check out my book, some more as you have time. Thank you for a review you did today.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Thanks for a generous review and comments.
I appreciate your time.
Comment from RGstar
Well done. a good structure with your core elements taking president as it should
I always have a soft spot for anything concerning stars, hence my name.
You haven't disappointed.
I love the colour scheme used for this piece.
Gives a feeling of serenity.
Well done,
RGstar
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Well done. a good structure with your core elements taking president as it should
I always have a soft spot for anything concerning stars, hence my name.
You haven't disappointed.
I love the colour scheme used for this piece.
Gives a feeling of serenity.
Well done,
RGstar
Comment Written 25-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your generous review and comments.
I am glad that you enjoyed it.
I appreciate your time.
Comment from Cookie333
I enjoyed the presentation of this one my friend, To be the one who shows these magical stars to a child, what an honor to see their faces light up. Looking through telescopes, finding constellations...does it get any better than that on a clear night?
thank you my friend,
karen
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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I enjoyed the presentation of this one my friend, To be the one who shows these magical stars to a child, what an honor to see their faces light up. Looking through telescopes, finding constellations...does it get any better than that on a clear night?
thank you my friend,
karen
Comment Written 25-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2013
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Thank you Karen.
There is such magic and mystery in the stars and night sky.
I appreciate your generous review and lovely comments.