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"The Gift of Life."

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True storiesof life loss and tragedy in this world

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Comment from tbacha58
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Crystallizing thoughts drifting
in an eye of blindness..
Sometime kind, sometime divine,
and sometime merciless!
Wandering forever in DISTRESS!!!

The wandering in distress, is what makes a human life become unbearable, Your variety amazes me, and the resect and love for Jesus, is unbelievable, the way you write your poems, stories, is unique. Great. Terry

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
    Well.
    Thanks for that Terry
    and you are my #1 fan!!
    ricky.
Comment from country ranch writer
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CHECK FOR TYPOS IN THE TWO PARAGRAPHS UNDER THE PICTURE' WASH AWAY THE PAIN AND SORROW IN THE WORLD FROM WITHIN AND BEGIN AGAIN WITH A CLEAN SLATE GIVEN TO YOU BY GOD FOR A SECOND CHANCE

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2013


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2013
    Thanks for your additions..
    I'll consoder them on anoter piece!
    ricky
reply by country ranch writer on 23-Sep-2013
    welcome